Bijoux Jewels [Click for the link]

by applecyanide

Title :  10 /10

The title is interesting. Kept me wondering about the meaning of the title though.

Desciption:  15 /20

I must say that the description is kind of short. It would be better if you could make it longer and insert more suspend. But it does attract my attention overall.

Grammar/Spelling:   30/30

You did not make any mistakes with that so far. It's pretty good.

Plot :  10/10

The plot  is great. Most of the story i've seen are either (kris x you x sehun/ kai x suho x you) But you made an addition of Nuhyun. It's good.

Story flow :   9/10

Love the way you take things slow. Since it's only the 6 chapters... I couldn't give you full for that. -laughs-

Characters combination (?) :  16 /20

I actually love the caring side of Baekhyun. <3 Okay. As for Bijou, it's quite mean to sabotage other's relationship. It's unique though.

Bonus   8 /10

i really love it so far. I'll wait for your next update. Good luck!

Total : 98/110

Loved your story overall. -smiles-

This is just my personal thought about your story. I appologize if you dislike or disagree with this review. -bows-

I just came home from school and i read your story in one go. :D Sorry, if I'm late~

Thank you for being the first customer of this shop~~~

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