I'll make you mine DO Kyungsoo [click for link]

by passionburn19

Title :   9/10

The title is fine. Nothing's wrong with it.

Foreword / Description :   17/20

The descirption was short but it's enough to gain readers.

Grammar/Spelling:  26 /30

There isn't much mistakes you made there.

1) I think that English Teacher of ours really is a fan of my stories....

2) "And I clearly told her to bring one."

3) All of them softened up at the sight of my me sobbing.

Plot :  9/10

The plot is interesting~

Story flow :   10/10

Cool~ Not too long not too short. Just enough for the readers to understand.

Characters combination (?) :   19/20

Do Kyungsoo, one of my bias from EXO~ hahaha

Bonus    8/10

Although I liked your storied overall, i don't understand one thing. It's like this story is base on your point of view isn't it?

How come you could like hear what Kyungsoo is thinking? LOL Ignore my stupid thought.

Total :  98 /110

This is just my personal opinion, so no bashing if it's low.

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