Only One Shot [click for link]

by 2NE1MinzyBsc

Title :   8/10

The title is fine, actually. *^*

Foreword / Description :   17/20

The description is actually pretty interesting. As you say that the girl seek her revenge and stuffs.

Grammar/Spelling:  24 /30

1) He began trying to get the bullet out of my arm, making me hurt badly.

2) Later that day, i got receive a suddenly call from my boss.

3) I took a few peeps and saw  that Jaejoong with seven more men and an old man.

Your spelling is fine but your grammar needs a little improvement.

Plot :  8/10

Since you got the inspiration of this story from 'One Shot' by B.A.P, it's quite good.

Story flow :   9/10

Like the way you take things, fast.

Characters combination (?) :   20/20

Since you included all members of B.A.P.. :D

Bonus   8 /10

Liked your story. Keep it up in the future!

Total :  94 /110

This is also my personal opinion. If you disagree with the marks, I'm sorry.

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