TheLandofBrownSugar (Femme Fatale)
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by TheLandofBrownSugar
Title : 9/10
The title looks classy~ Mind explaining what it means?
Foreword / Description : 18/20
The description is so far so good. That's the only thing I could say.
Grammar/Spelling: 27/30
1) Riiiight....
2) As soon as hers eyes met mine, they looked away once again.
Your spelling seems fine. And there's nothing wrong with your grammar.
Plot : 9/10
The plot is interesting and it looks original enough.
Story flow : 8 /10
Since it's one-shot, there's nothing much to write about the story flow.
Characters combination (?) : 19 /20
In my own opinion, I don't actually prefer girlxgirl... but I do ship Sunsoo couple~ kekeke
Bonus 8/10
A Sone here~ So emm c:
Total : 98/110
Sorry if you think it's low. -bows-
And all the best in writing more SNSD fanfics in the future~ :D
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©inspiritfriend
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