part 21 FINAL

Open up to me Taemint

What the okay so I look and my story has 848 views 
Then a half hour later I look again and I have 825 views 
How can my views just drop like that? 

your pov 

"well I have good news for you. 
According to our last tests we can say that you are fully cured." The doctor said 

"That’s great news." You heard you mom say from behind you 

"thought we still want you to come back time to time just to make sure it doesn't come back." 

~two hours later~ 

you were ringing the bell. 
Was this really a good idea I don't even know if they are home. You thought to yourself. 
But then the door opened. 

"may I come in?"

"always" Onew said holding the door open for you. "Taemin isn't here right now." 

"really when will he be back?" 

"not sure it could be late."  Onew shrugged 

"Oh well . I wanted to come because this morning I was at the doctor. He said that I was fully cured so that's why I made a cake" you say showing the cake. 

"well it would be a waste not to eat it" key said

"but what about Taemin."  You asked 

"he just has to miss it" 

"ya Key that's not right" Minho said 

"guys do you really think you can eat a whole cake? ”

“Yes!” they said in unison. 

“let’s  just call him okay” 
Jonghyun said getting his phone and called him.

“Taemin where are you right now?”

”I’m on my way to agi. I wanted to visit her with a cake.”

“okay when do you think you will be home?”

“I don’t know I think I will stay with agi for the rest of the day”
“Okay than I know enough see ya then”

“bye”
Taemin said and Jonghyun hang up .

“And what did he say?”

“it won’t belong until he is here.”

“okay then lets eat.” 

Everyone got a piece of cake. There was even one really for Taemin 
when he would come. And finally he was there. 
After Taemin being mad at at Jonghyun for not telling him his agi was here.
You all happily ate you cake and Taemins.
The rest of the day was filled with chatting and laughter.
And before you knew it, it was already dark. 

“I think it’s time for me to go home now”

“Can’t you stay the night” Taemin whined.

“I would like too but I don’t have anything with me and I promised t come home today.”

“Than at least let me walk you home. It’s pretty dark.”

“sure.”


The walk home was quiet and awkward.  
“Were here” Taemin said snapping you out of your thoughts.

“Today was fun”

“It was. Will you come back tomorrow?”

“I don’t know I will see”

It was quiet again you looked up at the sky.
A cloud drifted  for the moon. Making it even darker.
Stars disappeared because of all de clouds.
When suddenly white dots appeared and snow started falling down.

“Snow”

You looked at Taemin. He was watching  the sky like you.
He looked so beautiful like that.
He now faced you. There was a slight blush on his cheeks and you wounded if it was the cold or something else. He slightly stepped closer to you. Moving closer to you .
Your body moved on its own doing the same. And before you knew it your lips met his. 
A wave of warmth flowed throw you and if felt like you were flying.
Then Your lips separated  staring deeply at each other really for another.

sorry I'm really bad at endings T.T

 
I did my best to make it romantic 
thought I think I kinda failed at that
even thought I couldn't stop sqweeeing hehe
well hope you enjoyed my story
I will work hard on my others 
and I'm already planning on new ones 
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Maria_Maraki
#1
Chapter 24: Was nice story!
shineestar1 #2
Chapter 8: Make it look like she died but comes back to life because of taemin love
Shroomies123 #3
Chapter 23: It's finished it was a good story, just wish the chapters were longer and they had more detail. Other than that no complaints!
Yesungluver #4
Chapter 10: Please update please
Yesungluver #5
Chapter 8: Let her live
JouJouBexotobap #6
Chapter 10: What was she going to ask???? Curious reader here :)
JouJouBexotobap #7
Chapter 9: WHOAAAA SHE MAYBE WILL LIVE MAYBE SHE CAN LIIIIIIIIIVE OMG THAT'S LIKE THE BEST THING EVER I LOVE AUTHOR-NIM!!!!!
JouJouBexotobap #8
Chapter 7: Omo I just can't... I'm gonna cry with Taeminnie T^T he did find out why he was rejected. Awwwwww I wanna know what will happen!!!
JouJouBexotobap #9
Chapter 6: Omg nae tae-baby noooooo :'( please be alright
JouJouBexotobap #10
Chapter 5: Omo Taeminnie. I bet he's feeling heartbroken right now :/ what will happen?! So excited >,<