Reviewed by Jihan

Story Title → 3 of 5

It tells too much about to the story and it's not that eye catching, so I would recommend you to change it.

Main Image → 5 of 5

Well I really love your poster it's very unique, and awesome and it fits the characters in your story very good :)

Foreword & Description → 7 of 10

You have designed the Foreword very nice and with all the pics it looks even better anyways one think bothered me is that you gave too much information.

Characters → 16 of 20 

I can't really tell because you don't have that much chapters now but I can say that I like Youngri's personallity it's new for me and specia, you did great. Compared to Zelo his character isn't new for me but yeah and for Tao his character is like all the playboys outside there but I think he hides his real self behind this whole jerk image.

Apperance → 10 of 10

There isn't much to tell besides that you did a great job ^.^

Originality → 13 of 20

I don't say that your story is that bad and I like this kind of stories but I have read many of this stories and they are unfortunatly almost the same. And don't forget you can always change it and make it even better and original :-P

Plot→ 16 of 20

I found it a bit boring at the beginning but somehow the secrets behind Tao made it more interesting. It's interesant indeed and I hope you keep it this way and add some action in your chapters or cliffhangers.

Reviewer Bonus → 4 of 10

That's because your poster is awesome its really great :)

Reviewer note 

You sometimes switch between she/her and he/his I only wanted to tell you. And  I didn't want to give you a low score but there are many many ff's that resemble yours and you only had 3 chapters so...

Total Score 74 of 100!! Thanks for letting me review your story :D