Reviewed by Jihan

Story Title → 3 of 5

The title isn't that original. If I would come across your story I'd think twice if I should check it out. On the other hand the tilte matches your story but I recommand you to think of a more catchy one.

Main Image → 5 of 5

The image is very beautiful and mysterious. It's simple but still has something special about it.

Foreword & Description → 10 of 10

Short, Simple and the perfect amount of informationn ;)

Characters → 18 of 20

Their personallity isn't that special but still well done!

Apperance → 7 of 10

I think it's a bit too plain, make it more livley by using some coulors. The font you used at the foreword would match with the chapters better than the font you're using now.

Originality → 20 of 20

I've never read a story like this one and I liked it, it was something new espacially without the typical happy end ^.^

Plot→ 20 of 20

I really like how smooth you write, not too fast nor too slow. I enjoyed the fluffy parts >.< there is actually nothing to complain.

Reviewer Bonus → 4 of 10 

This is for your awesome poster and of your good writing skills ;) 

Reviewers Note:

I wanted only to remind you that short before the ending you switched between her and his for ex.:  → "But appa, you're tired. You better sleep" Soojin told her father

       → Soojin guided his her father 

       → Jongin refused her his daughter's offer

       → Jongin looked at her his daugther etc. ...
 

I think it wasn't on purpose!

Total score 87 of 100 and thank you for subscribing and letting me review your story I really enjoyed reading it ^.^