►reviewed by Emy

Story Title → 3 of 5

It matches the story very well but for me it tells a bit too much. I think like 'What? I can't love my Bias?!' would be more interesting.

Main Image → 5 of 5

Cute & funny, I like it.

Foreword & Description → 7 of 10

It's short and good (I always prefer short descriptions ;D) but like I said, I think it tells too much about the story. It would be much more interesting if you write for example, that the girl is gonna live with him or whatever but she cant love him...you know what I mean?

Characters → 16 of 20

The charcters are funny and match the story but they are quiet too typical. I also write stories and I never manage to make all main characters unique but one or two must be totally different from others to make it interesting. 

Apperance → 9 of 10 

Well to  be honest, I hate this kind of font you use. It irritates me everytime I read your story but I think it depends on the readers taste so no minus point :D Oh and sometimes you let too much distance between dialogs besides that is everything fine.

Originality → 18 of 20

There are many ff's with forbidden love but yours is not the typical one since Baekhyun is her brother and bias at the same time. You know that I thought about what if Kai (my bias..keke) was my brother? And I came to a not so good result. I would have killed myself! I would have died or I would have fallen for Luhan (my second bias..kekek) c(:

Plot→ 17 of 20

Sometimes I must read sentences twice to get what you mean. Maybe I am too stupid? This is also possible xD But you change the times a lot so that confuses me. And in my opnion is Baekhyun a bit too cheesy, I also have a brother and we always fight 24/7. I like Luhan and Kai's evil character <3 I'll continue reading your story 'cause I want to know if Yoonmi can give up her feelings for Baekhyun and accept him as her brother?

Reviewer Bonus → 5 of 10

I like it that you make it somehow realistic and I like Na Eun's character since she resembels my friend too much :D

Reviewer's Note:

There is something I want to remind you. Please pay attention to Case-sensitive.

Totall: 80 out of 100!!! Not that bad :D thx for requesting!