►Reviewed by Emy

Story Title → 3 of 5

I think it's not that good. Why? It tells that the girl or Kai is gonna fall in love when it says 'Do Not Fall In Love'. I think you did this on purpose but it's too obvious. 

Main Image → 5 of 5

Nothing much too say. It describes the characters very good.

Foreword & Description → 6 of 10 

Its the typical one, not gripping nor interesting...

Characters → 20 of 20

Perfect choice! *.*  I love your characters!

Apperance → 10 of 10

Nothing to complain. Everything in the right place.

Originality → 17 of 20 

Well this is the point were I am not so sure. Your story is normal and not that different from others that I've read, but then agian. The girls character is too epic. So your story is actually not that typical. It has its own flavour/taste if you know what I mean? Gosh, I am talking nonsense right now xD

Plot→ 19 of 20

Not too fast nor too slow. I liked the way how you started in the first chapter the only thing that bugged me was that Kai likes her...  I think it's too fast.

Reviewer Bonus → 5 of 10

I enjoyed reading your story and I am gonna continue reading :D hope you update soon!

Totall: 85 out of 100!!! Thx for requesting :D