Reviewed by Jihan

Story Title → 3 of 5

Well your title isn't that unique nor eye-catching therefor...

Main Image → 1 of 5

Not really a poster and his facial eypression doesn't match his character.

Foreword & Description → 6 of 10

It's ok but there is somethings important missing, like introducing the characters and put a picture, that would be better.

Characters → 12 of 20

I can't really tell because your story is short and it dosen't tell much about their personallity. Well for the girl I honestly don't know but she seems ok and for Chanyeol hmm... his character fits the story but still normal. 

Apperance → 9,5 of 10

It would be better if you would do it more lively because it seems too plain but all in all it's ok.

Originality → 20 of 20

Your story is unique I never expected him as  ghost but that was what made it so special. 

Plot→ 19 of 20

It was a bit sad but one thing, I don't understand is why was she in the hospital but I still liked it ^.^ 

Reviewer Bonus → 3 of 10

I gave you this bonus for your good writing skills :)

Total score 73.5 out of 100 thanks for subscribing and letting me reviewing your story =)