Reviewed by Jihan 

Story Title → 3 of 5

Well, your title is a bit boring not that eye-catching and many others have this title.

Main Image → 3,5 of 5

Your poster is nice but you could have choose another pic of Siwon. Or you could also have used the half of Suho's face as well the half of Siwon's face and put it together, this would make a great effect since they both look alike.

Foreword & Description → 10 of 10

It's perfect, so nothing to complain about.

Characters → 20 of 20

I liked the characters in your story mostly Suho's character 'cause you didn't represent him as the perfect man. 

Apperance → 10 of 10

Well done :)

Originality → 20 of 20

A very origianl story, I have never read one like this.

Plot→ 20 of 20

It was all clear for me and easy to understand and your writing skills are good. Well to be honest I don't like sad endings but it depends on the readers taste, right?

Reviewer Bonus 

Sorry but there was nothing special about your story...

Reviewer note:

You have some typos but it's not that bad^.^