Otteoke?! Stuck Between Kris and Sehun by twosuns

EXO - Review Shop (Closed)

 

                                              

 

You're probably thinking how I got to read your story this fast? Well, I was one of your subscriber but I stopped reading your story after the 70th chapter. Why? You will know it when you read the plot part..

 


►Reviewed by Emy

Story Title → 2 of 5

Your title is gripping and unique but in my opinoin it doesn't match the story. I think  'My violent life with the annoying brat!' matches the story better xD

Main Image → 5 of 5

It's good!  

Foreword & Description → 0 of 10

There is no foreword or discription, expect of some sentence about how much you love EXO and SuJu.

Characters → 17 of 20

Lee Bin Yoon is quiet too arrogant and violent but I like it how she treats little kids :D
Suho is alos funny and sometimes careless, I would love to have a brother like him.
Kris is... what should I say? He's okay...
Sehun, Yoona and Jessica have a typical character to be honest quiet too typical.

Apperance → 9 of 10

Not bad but could have been better.

Originality → 20 of 20

Besides the typical characters is everything good. I've never read a similar story! Also the way you write it is another asset.

Plot→ 11 of 20

Let's get to the part why I stopped reading your story. Your story has barely something to do with Sehun or Kris. Yes, I know there are some Sehun or Kris times but in my eyes are Chanyeol and Baekhuyn more in the foreground as the main characters. It's more a story based on a girls crazy school life than a romance. The half of your chapters are useless. I don't say they are bad, no in fact, they are funny and enjoyable but have nothing to do with the story. And I didn't read your story till the end... since this was too much for me.

Reviewer Bonus → 5 of 10

I love your crazy ideas >u< and how Baekhyun calls her 'boss'.

 

Total: 69 out of 100

 
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Skaifall #1
i requested... but i realised that you guys were closed D: sorry for my blindness... i just noticed the huge CLOSED in your title...and i didnt read the foreword since ive requested here before.. just ignore my request then (:
heerinkim
#2
hello! i already filled up the request form. :D
Maudmoonshine #3
Sorry i wasnt able to comment right away, but i requested :)
Soo-Yeon
#4
I requested ~ ^-^
treehugger
#5
I requested! ;)
Janie95
#6
Chapter 20: Hi! Thank you for your review! I'm so happy about the grade! :)
About the tittles, they have names of food because the main tittle name: "Anthology: Spice of Life" so for each story, I'll pick a different spice for it, xD.
redocean-
#7
Requested :-)
Janie95
#8
Hi, I've just requested :)
Nazaki
#9
Chapter 17: Thank you for the review and sorry about that lack of chapter as i haven't been able to update to due to my exams :)
Exokristao
#10
Chapter 16: Thanks for the review ^^ and i'm also excited for exo's comeback *Q* i mean D.O and baek just-