►Reviewed by Emy

Story Title → 3 of 5
To be honest your title wasn't that eye-catching. Simple & Plain, but it matches the story somehow...

Main Image → 5 of 5
It's kind of mystery and romantic, just like your story.

Foreward & Description → 10 of 10
It's short simple, yet gripping and misterious. What can I say? Well done!

Characters → 10 of 20
At first I thought, Jiyeon is some misterious girl but in the end she seemed like every other girl. So, and Baekhyun is quite plain and boring...

Apperance → 10 of 10
You used Times New Roman, that matched the story very well!

Originality → 18 of 20 
Your story is not that similar to others, good! No cliché, but still too short...

Plot →  17 of  20

Very creative and I like the not happy ending! The only thing that bothered me was that Jiyeon fell too fast in love with Baekhyn ...

Reviewer Bonus → 5 of 10

I give you 5 extra points because your writing skills are really really good! How you described the place and everything... just amazing :D 

Totall: 78 of 100

Thank you for being my first victim XDDDDDDD I actually don't read those kinds of story but I must say that I enjoyed yours!