Reviewed by Jihan

Storyline → 4 of 5 

Besides that your titel isn't that original it's good.

Main Image → 5 of 5

I like your poster it's so awesome and it fits your story perfect.

Foreword & Description → 8 of 10 

It's simple and short I like it that way but you could have introuced the characters and put a picture so it would be better to imagine :)

Characters → 16 of 20

Well I like Luhan's personallity because he isn't the typical player or cold-hearted person like in other fics. For the girl, she's pretty normal you could have made her special.

Apperance → 9,5 of 10 

It's good but a bit of colour wouldn't harm.

Originality → 15 of 20

Your stroy isn't bad but I've watched twilight and it reminds me a lot of it. But you still managed to make it special :D

Plot→ 18 of 20

You did well in the plot it's not boring and also not precipitated. Your writing skills are also great so that I could almost imagin everything. But you should add more dialogue in it.

Reviewer Bonus → 5 of 10 

I like the way how you always get to the point and your wonderful poster ^.^

Total: 80,5 out of 100! and thanks for requesting and I enjoyed reading your story