A fangirl's dream Why Love Changes? by yiyhan

EXO - Review Shop (Closed)

 

 

Reviewed by Jihan

 

Story Title → 2 of 5 

Not catchy, nor interesting, too plain.

 

Main Image → 3 of 5 

The photos in the poster don't resemble the personallities in the story and Jiyeon is a bit to big in the pic.

 

Foreword & Description → 7 of 10

I like your foreword but the only thing that bothered me, you could have did the pics of  them a bit smaller and in a better order: like the pics in one side and the script next to it.

 

Characters →18 of 20

They were pretty normal nothing special. But it still fits your story.

 

Apperance →10 of 10

Awesome the whole video links and photos did make it more enjoyable and livley. 

 

Originality → 20 of 20 

I like your idea it was something new for me :)

 

Plot→ 20 of 20

It was all clear. Not too hasty nor too slow :D

 

Reviewer Bonus →5 of  10

I think you deserve this bonus because the videos and photos ^.^

 

Reviewer note:

You sometimes don't write the whole word or forget some words in a sentence expect of this you did great.

 

Total score 85 out of 100 and thanks for requesting :) it was fun 

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Skaifall #1
i requested... but i realised that you guys were closed D: sorry for my blindness... i just noticed the huge CLOSED in your title...and i didnt read the foreword since ive requested here before.. just ignore my request then (:
heerinkim
#2
hello! i already filled up the request form. :D
Maudmoonshine #3
Sorry i wasnt able to comment right away, but i requested :)
Soo-Yeon
#4
I requested ~ ^-^
treehugger
#5
I requested! ;)
Janie95
#6
Chapter 20: Hi! Thank you for your review! I'm so happy about the grade! :)
About the tittles, they have names of food because the main tittle name: "Anthology: Spice of Life" so for each story, I'll pick a different spice for it, xD.
redocean-
#7
Requested :-)
Janie95
#8
Hi, I've just requested :)
Nazaki
#9
Chapter 17: Thank you for the review and sorry about that lack of chapter as i haven't been able to update to due to my exams :)
Exokristao
#10
Chapter 16: Thanks for the review ^^ and i'm also excited for exo's comeback *Q* i mean D.O and baek just-