A fangirl's dream Why Love Changes? by yiyhan
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Reviewed by Jihan
Story Title → 2 of 5
Not catchy, nor interesting, too plain.
Main Image → 3 of 5
The photos in the poster don't resemble the personallities in the story and Jiyeon is a bit to big in the pic.
Foreword & Description → 7 of 10
I like your foreword but the only thing that bothered me, you could have did the pics of them a bit smaller and in a better order: like the pics in one side and the script next to it.
Characters →18 of 20
They were pretty normal nothing special. But it still fits your story.
Apperance →10 of 10
Awesome the whole video links and photos did make it more enjoyable and livley.
Originality → 20 of 20
I like your idea it was something new for me :)
Plot→ 20 of 20
It was all clear. Not too hasty nor too slow :D
Reviewer Bonus →5 of 10
I think you deserve this bonus because the videos and photos ^.^
Reviewer note:
You sometimes don't write the whole word or forget some words in a sentence expect of this you did great.
Total score 85 out of 100 and thanks for requesting :) it was fun
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