Reviewed by Jihan

Story Title → 3 of 5

Your story title isn't that special but it matches your storyline.

Main Image → 5 of 5

It's nice and simple :)

Foreword & Description → 9,5 of 10

The foreword is great but it dosen't describes the story that much but I somehow understand why you didn't write that much 'cause your story itself is very short.

Characters → 10 of 20

Not much to say, since there is only one chapter, so...

Apperance → 10 of 10

It's good nothing to complain about...

Originality → 20 of 20

It's really original since I've never read this kind of story :D and there aren't that much Kyungsoo stories so you choose the right characters!

Plot→ 15 of 20

Too fast and unrealistic...You know how it can be better? For example you can write that the girl is cuddling happily with her husband Kyungsoo and then she asks him if he remembers how they met...and then you can put a flashback :D

Reviewer Bonus → 5 of 10

It was somehow funny, I don't know why but you got me giggling :) oh yeah and the part where you wrote that the girl was reading one of your stories I fell of the chair and couldn't stop laughing xD what a hilarious idea???

Totall: 77, 5 out of 100!!!!!Thank you for requesting you made me smile, I really enjoyed it :DD