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Black Paradise

 

R/N: Updated the same chapter, sorry >.<  I find the bickering between Byunghun and Chanhee cute I can’t even –cries-. Yeah I’m talking about my own story I should really stop doing that T_T I’m going to try to shove in a ChunJoe moment in this chapter. At least one, maybe two? And we need a kiss scene soon~~ –wiggles eyebrows- No but seriously, tell me what you guys think of this so far!

A couple hours had passed, and there was no sign of Changhyun. Both boys were starving. Chanhee seriously regretted not bringing that glass of water upstairs.

The conversation had died out, and a thick silence had lapsed the room. Byunghun was still in the same spot, on the floor, and was drowsing in and out of sleep. However, at some point during the couple hours he had rolled away from the door and was now curled up with his back against the wall beside the door. Chanhee forced himself to stay awake, staring at the patterns on the curtain in Changhyun’s room.

It was funny that he thought of Changhyun, because at that moment, the slight turn of the door knob could be heard. The room had been pitch black, Chanhee turning the light off after he saw that Byunghun was sleeping. I’m so generous and caring. Kudos to me.

A stream of yellow light lit up half the room, thankfully Chanhee’s side. A small figure created a spot of black in the limelight, and it seemed like he was carrying something with his hands. “Hyungs?” He called into the room.

Chanhee shielded his eyes from the sudden burst of light. “Byunghun is sleeping, keep it down.”

Changhyun gave a soft laugh. “He always sleeps when he’s nervous about something, that weird hyung. I brought you food! I’m just gonna put it on the table and,” He placed the tray on the desk table on the opposite wall Byunghun was leaning against and dashed for the door, locking it quickly. Footsteps could he heard getting gradually farther away from the door.

Chanhee blinked. At first, he was a bit excited about the fact that he would be locked up in a room with Byunghun. Well, he wasn’t as uncomfortable with it as Byunghun seemed to be, anyways. But seriously, treating them like prisoners in his room was going too far in Changhyun’s part, wasn’t it?

Curious as to what Changhyun had brought his prisoners, Chanhee swung his legs off the bed, quickly forcing his body to co-operate and finally walked over to the table. The tray was overflowing with pastries, two bottles of water, sandwiches and…was that slices of cake? Chanhee smirked. Ah, Changhyun. If he wanted to play this game, he shouldn’t have been so generous with the food. “That kid…” He muttered to himself, shaking his head.

Now it was the question of whether or not he should wake Byunghun. Before he slept, he had heard Byunghun complain about how hungry he was, and also heard him call Ricky a few names that, if repeated by Chanhee at home, would get him thrown into the streets to die. Besides, he was sleeping on the floor in this odd position that looked as if he was protecting his insides from a pretend fighter.

Quietly, he tip toed over to where Byunghun laid. A series of even breathing could be heard from the younger boy. Chanhee took one knee beside him, and gently tapped his shoulder. “Byunghun. Wake up.” He softly whispered.

Nothing.

Byunghun didn’t even stir, and his breathing remained even and steady.

Chanhee frowned slightly. Usually Changhyun woke up when Chanhee had did that—a soft tap and a whisper.

“Byunghun.” Chanhee gripped the boy’s shoulder and shook him slightly.

When Byunghun groaned faintly, slightly shifting his position, Chanhee snatched his hand away and froze. His heart accelerated. Would Byunghun be mad at him for waking him up while he was sleeping? And he was kind of glad too—it got lonely without Byunghun there to be complaining about every possible thing that went wrong.

But despite his movements, the younger boy settled down, lying straight now, and gave a deep sigh.

Chanhee sighed, leaning over to Byunghun’s ear. “Byunghun. Wake. Up.”

The younger boy shivered, before shooting upwards. Chanhee kneeled on both knees beside Byunghun, dramatically giving a sigh of tiredness, as if it took everything in him to wake the other boy up. “Geez, it took a good ten minutes to get you up. There’s food.” Chanhee got up from the floor, and walked back onto the bed.

Byunghun wearily sat up, slouching his shoulders. He felt groggy, and a headache slammed into him almost immediately. Holding his temples with his fingers, he clumsily got up. “How long was I asleep for?”

Chanhee noticed how thick with sleep the younger boy’s voice was laced with. Pretty y.

“I dunno.”

Byunghun opened a bottle of water, taking a small sip before screwing the cap back on and throwing it to the wall he was at. He walked back to his spot near the wall. Chanhee squinted in realization as to what Byunghun was doing.

“Don’t sleep on the floor; you’re just going to make your headache worse. Who knows how long it’s been since Changhyun cleaned his floor.”

“What headache.”

“Just get your on the bed and sleep like a normal person.”

“No.”

“Is it because of me? I’ll sleep on the floor then.”

“Chanhee, I’m fine on the floor. Can you just go back to doing whatever it is you were doing?”

Chanhee gave a sigh, and sat upright. He sorted out a plan in his mind briefly, before getting off the bed and walking towards Byunghun, who was still sitting on the floor. Grabbing his elbow, he forced the younger to get up. “What are you—” Byunghun began, before Chanhee pushed him forward, in the direction of the bed. “Lie down, you little rascal,” He ordered, before walking around the bed and plopping down on his side.

He noticed Byunghun’s hesitance. Changhyun’s bed wasn’t exactly fit to hold two people who needed space. But in the end, Byunghun lay down, wrapping a part of the free blanket around his body. Their shoulders touched, since it the only way for both boys to fit onto the bed. Chanhee smirked to himself, and turned so that his back faced the younger. “Goodnight,” He told Byunghun softly.

“Yeah…”

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NaKyon-Kyon
#1
UPDATE PLEASE
strafield #2
Chapter 35: Hey! Your new fan here, kkk~
I really really really like this story, i read all the chapters in one go since yesterday hahahahha
I like the plots and how much of a byunghun-centric this story is. coughs- its bottom byung too , im a total er for cute byungie xD
And i was actually looking forward to myungjoe making out- ops hahahahhahaha
And is it just me that not so secretly wanting chunji and byunghun to have some kind of feelings towards each other- damn how i love chunji's passive-aggresive personality XD
but but but the last time you updated this was 2014------- am i too late to beg for updates? :(
Please please please i beg you with cherry on top and byungie as extra cherries on top * ^ *
18succubus
#3
Chapter 35: Sorry got confused there with another story (abt the lawyer question ?)
18succubus
#4
Chapter 35: Wwaaaahhhh, what was that?!?! Got mixed emo with the story. Who is chorong in chunji's life? Byunghun is really that goddam handsome, even chanhee's twin liked him! How's byunghun's parents, are they safe from mr. Hwang? How's chunjoe's schooling? How will byunghun become a lawyer? When will they have again???? hahaha~ i can't wait to know where will this story go. Update, pls
chunjixbyungie
#5
Chapter 35: YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING ME !!!!
YOU DIDNT JUST LEAVE WITH THE
WORST CLIFFHANGER EVER .
NO (┳Д┳)ಥ_ಥ
.....
Huff ok thnx 4 the update n looking 4ward to ur other stories bec i luv them.
Chanhees pov was heartbreaking
N so relate-able .
Its so sad he feels alone like no one understands him
Feeling he was a temporary thing was so SAD. God !!!
Byung is an idiot huhu .
I cant wait to see chanhees reaction.
I have a feeling he wouldnt just give in huhu .
chunjixbyungie
#6
Chapter 23: OMG ehem am i the only one shipping byung with chunji too ???
GOD !!!!
that was pure bless
how byunghun started hallucinating and he thought they could make their voice sound like woohyun omg
that was perfect .
it perfectly described his fear and everything oh god XD .
chunjixbyungie
#7
Chapter 19: this is gonna be a really long comment because im gonna write my opinion about the whole ch i read
which is few (i just discovered this yesterday or s o i thought )it seems i read it before bec in ch 7 before xD.

anyways i skipped through the ch and i read couple of ch and i came to this conclusion
I JUST LOVE THIS OMG !!!!HOW COME YOU MANAGE TO DO IT ???
LIKE OMG INFINITE AND TEEN TOP GOSH IM A PURE ANGEL AND INFINITE COMES RIGHT AFTER TEENTOP FOR ME.
CAN YOU IMAGINE MY FEELS ???? PLUS HYERI OMG !!! I LOVE HOW YOU DESCRIBED THAT EVEN THOUGH SHE'S NIEL'S COUSIN SHE GRADUALLY GOT CLOSER TO BYUNGHUN .
your writing is awesome, the vocabs , the phrasing , the interactions, how you managed to link all those characters together and still give them their roles and definite personality .. this is so damn hard.. it's really realistic and there's a huge load of humor xD .
chunjoe are killing me .. omg i love how you display their affection for each other and how they are cheesy not cliche
how chanhee missed byunghun's attention when hyunwoo was calling omg aaaah
& whenever byung got up chanhee held him still omg .
THIS CH is killing me !!!!
other than the fact your skills are great you made chanhee the dominting one OMG although at the end he rode him at the end i can never complain xD . IM a crazy hardcore bottomjoe believer xD .
so this was just too much for me it was an extra .. the was so unique and authentic srsly ????!!!!!!
i have nothing to say ..other than i now feel like having lol omg !!!!
i couldn't stop rereading it , my ipad was 7% and i couldn't bring myself to search for the charger !!!!!
other thing i love how you made it byung centered kind of .. i mean hoya omg and hyunwoo with byung !!!!!
how you made everybody fond of byungieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Now going forward, about miyoung and L aaaah omg that was one hell of a chapter !!!!
i can perfectly understand byung yet i can really relate to jonghyn's pov !, poor chanhee though .
Kyattchan #8
Chapter 34: "Niel furrowed his brows in confusion, a thought ringing in his head. He had to keep himself from gasping. Byunghun, Chorong, and another girl…Byunghun was having a !"
BEST PART EVER! XD
I'm really loving this story.. it has been a really interesting ride. From the first chapter it seemed like a cute and cool story and it keeps getting more and more intriguing. The whole twin twist showed up out of nowhere too but it just fit right in. Even tho Chunji is super evil and mean.. I can't help but also really like him and feel a tiny bit sorry for him (even tho he almost killed my L.Joe!! T_T). I'm such a too because I keep thinking about how a would go since they the last two chapters!
Oh! And maybe I'm just weird for asking (hoping) this but this is stuck in my mind and I need to ask! Is Minsoo showing up again any time soon? >_< I dunno why but even tho he hardly showed up in your story I'm wondering he will make another appearance soon..! It's kind of odd how I don't usually care much for him when stories are ChunJoe centric but for some reason he got stuck in my mind. O_o
Anyway... sorry for my ramblings. Just know that I'm LOVING the story! I hope to read an update soon~ :)
Kyattchan #9
Chapter 19: Damn.. that was hot.. Like twice hot because.. you know.. TWICE! Thrice if you count the bathroom scene! It was just very very good and hot!... I just needed to get that out.. :D *goes back to reading the story..*
TeenGez14Top
#10
Chapter 34: Byunghun and Chanhee nooooo.
Though I do understand Byunghun's frustration. Just about anyone's really! Even I would have lost it with all the confusion. (Though I'm slightly taking a liking for Chunji... his wit gets to me lol)
Hmm anyways let's see what happens next:O
Good luck for the upcoming updates ^^