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Black Paradise

 

R/N: CRIES BC IM MAKING LJOE SEEM SO BAD.

HE’S LOVABLE THOUGH RIGHT?

I MEAN JUST LOOK AT HIM

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As the night progressed, Changhyun just got more furious. Byunghun barely looked at him, let alone even spoke with him. He was too busy arguing, or as Changhyun filthily called it, flirting, with Chanhee. Mir, Woohyun, Byunghun and Chanhee seemed to be getting along well, talking as if they had known each other way before their first meeting which was tonight.

Byunghun, on the other hand, was having the night of his life. The guys were cool; he was especially fond of Woohyun. The two boys were interested in all aspects of music, and even talked of potential back-drop beats for the song they wanted to produce. Without Miyoung, Byunghun felt so comfortable, so free. Even with Chanhee around. Thinking of spending time of Chanhee after what had happened at Changhyun’s house was a lot worse than actually hanging out with him physically.

Byunghun also noticed a few times when Chanhee would grab his knee from under the table, or use his fingertips to his thigh. All while conversing with the other boys, as if nothing was going on. At first, he silently protested, shifting away from him, or even slapping his hand away. But even if he shifted away, sooner or later he found himself close to Chanhee again. And, no matter what he tried to do to stop Chanhee from touching him like that, he silently admitted defeat and stopped trying because the older continued regardless.

When he had stopped trying to get Chanhee to stop, Byunghun realized that Chanhee’s touches actually felt…good. When Chanhee’s thumb accidently brushed against Byunghun’s inner part of his clothed thigh as his fingers travelled down his thigh, the younger shivered, letting out a breathy sigh.

Woohyun and Mir were busy arguing who their favorite young actresses were. Woohyun was rooting for Eunji, and Mir sided with Lim Soo Hyang. Because of their bickering, they didn’t realize what was going on with Chanhee and Byunghun. But Changhyun had.

Changhyun didn’t know that Chanhee was touching Byunghun at first. He just saw Byunghun shiver slightly for a bit, and let out something that resembled a quiet moan. He found it weird, how random that was. But when he saw Chanhee chuckle lowly, whispering something in Byunghun’s ear, the pieces began to click into place. Of course, Chanhee was the cause of that.

Byunghun’s face flushed, as he proceeded to look at the TV screen. A baseball game was playing on several different TVs scattered along the walls of the restaurant. Chanhee took this opportunity and leaned towards Byunghun, covering the side his mouth with the side of his hand, to make it look like he was telling the younger something private.

Changhyun stared at what was going on, in confusion. He was just about to tear his eyes away, growingly uncomfortable with what was going on over there, when he saw Byunghun’s eyelids flutter, an attempt of his body trying to get him to close his eyes but him fighting trying to keep them open. He watched Byunghun his lower lip before biting on it.

Changhyun glared at Chanhee. Was Chanhee really seducing Byunghun at a restaurant? Byunghun had a girlfriend! She would be furious if she found out! But it was clear Byunghun could give two flying s, as he made no attempt to push the older away.

Was he angrier at Chanhee for toying with a taken boy, or Byunghun for letting himself get toyed? Changhyun wasn’t sure. But he could feel something in the pit of his stomach. Jealousy. He knew that if he had tried any of those antics that Chanhee had, Byunghun would have for SURE scolded him, and possibly never talked with him again. But Chanhee had been teasing him, and Byunghun barely put up a fight. Why was that? How was that fair! Changhyun had the decency not to meddle and work his way into Byunghun’s relationship with Miyoung. Chanhee had walked all over it, and was getting all of Byunghun’s attention. It should have been Changhyun getting the attention, he was the one being the better friend!

Changhyun went through the rest of the night, digging his nails into the palms of his hands, trying to get himself to ignore everything. I won’t look. I’m not getting myself involved in that drama. 

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NaKyon-Kyon
#1
UPDATE PLEASE
strafield #2
Chapter 35: Hey! Your new fan here, kkk~
I really really really like this story, i read all the chapters in one go since yesterday hahahahha
I like the plots and how much of a byunghun-centric this story is. coughs- its bottom byung too , im a total er for cute byungie xD
And i was actually looking forward to myungjoe making out- ops hahahahhahaha
And is it just me that not so secretly wanting chunji and byunghun to have some kind of feelings towards each other- damn how i love chunji's passive-aggresive personality XD
but but but the last time you updated this was 2014------- am i too late to beg for updates? :(
Please please please i beg you with cherry on top and byungie as extra cherries on top * ^ *
18succubus
#3
Chapter 35: Sorry got confused there with another story (abt the lawyer question ?)
18succubus
#4
Chapter 35: Wwaaaahhhh, what was that?!?! Got mixed emo with the story. Who is chorong in chunji's life? Byunghun is really that goddam handsome, even chanhee's twin liked him! How's byunghun's parents, are they safe from mr. Hwang? How's chunjoe's schooling? How will byunghun become a lawyer? When will they have again???? hahaha~ i can't wait to know where will this story go. Update, pls
chunjixbyungie
#5
Chapter 35: YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING ME !!!!
YOU DIDNT JUST LEAVE WITH THE
WORST CLIFFHANGER EVER .
NO (┳Д┳)ಥ_ಥ
.....
Huff ok thnx 4 the update n looking 4ward to ur other stories bec i luv them.
Chanhees pov was heartbreaking
N so relate-able .
Its so sad he feels alone like no one understands him
Feeling he was a temporary thing was so SAD. God !!!
Byung is an idiot huhu .
I cant wait to see chanhees reaction.
I have a feeling he wouldnt just give in huhu .
chunjixbyungie
#6
Chapter 23: OMG ehem am i the only one shipping byung with chunji too ???
GOD !!!!
that was pure bless
how byunghun started hallucinating and he thought they could make their voice sound like woohyun omg
that was perfect .
it perfectly described his fear and everything oh god XD .
chunjixbyungie
#7
Chapter 19: this is gonna be a really long comment because im gonna write my opinion about the whole ch i read
which is few (i just discovered this yesterday or s o i thought )it seems i read it before bec in ch 7 before xD.

anyways i skipped through the ch and i read couple of ch and i came to this conclusion
I JUST LOVE THIS OMG !!!!HOW COME YOU MANAGE TO DO IT ???
LIKE OMG INFINITE AND TEEN TOP GOSH IM A PURE ANGEL AND INFINITE COMES RIGHT AFTER TEENTOP FOR ME.
CAN YOU IMAGINE MY FEELS ???? PLUS HYERI OMG !!! I LOVE HOW YOU DESCRIBED THAT EVEN THOUGH SHE'S NIEL'S COUSIN SHE GRADUALLY GOT CLOSER TO BYUNGHUN .
your writing is awesome, the vocabs , the phrasing , the interactions, how you managed to link all those characters together and still give them their roles and definite personality .. this is so damn hard.. it's really realistic and there's a huge load of humor xD .
chunjoe are killing me .. omg i love how you display their affection for each other and how they are cheesy not cliche
how chanhee missed byunghun's attention when hyunwoo was calling omg aaaah
& whenever byung got up chanhee held him still omg .
THIS CH is killing me !!!!
other than the fact your skills are great you made chanhee the dominting one OMG although at the end he rode him at the end i can never complain xD . IM a crazy hardcore bottomjoe believer xD .
so this was just too much for me it was an extra .. the was so unique and authentic srsly ????!!!!!!
i have nothing to say ..other than i now feel like having lol omg !!!!
i couldn't stop rereading it , my ipad was 7% and i couldn't bring myself to search for the charger !!!!!
other thing i love how you made it byung centered kind of .. i mean hoya omg and hyunwoo with byung !!!!!
how you made everybody fond of byungieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Now going forward, about miyoung and L aaaah omg that was one hell of a chapter !!!!
i can perfectly understand byung yet i can really relate to jonghyn's pov !, poor chanhee though .
Kyattchan #8
Chapter 34: "Niel furrowed his brows in confusion, a thought ringing in his head. He had to keep himself from gasping. Byunghun, Chorong, and another girl…Byunghun was having a !"
BEST PART EVER! XD
I'm really loving this story.. it has been a really interesting ride. From the first chapter it seemed like a cute and cool story and it keeps getting more and more intriguing. The whole twin twist showed up out of nowhere too but it just fit right in. Even tho Chunji is super evil and mean.. I can't help but also really like him and feel a tiny bit sorry for him (even tho he almost killed my L.Joe!! T_T). I'm such a too because I keep thinking about how a would go since they the last two chapters!
Oh! And maybe I'm just weird for asking (hoping) this but this is stuck in my mind and I need to ask! Is Minsoo showing up again any time soon? >_< I dunno why but even tho he hardly showed up in your story I'm wondering he will make another appearance soon..! It's kind of odd how I don't usually care much for him when stories are ChunJoe centric but for some reason he got stuck in my mind. O_o
Anyway... sorry for my ramblings. Just know that I'm LOVING the story! I hope to read an update soon~ :)
Kyattchan #9
Chapter 19: Damn.. that was hot.. Like twice hot because.. you know.. TWICE! Thrice if you count the bathroom scene! It was just very very good and hot!... I just needed to get that out.. :D *goes back to reading the story..*
TeenGez14Top
#10
Chapter 34: Byunghun and Chanhee nooooo.
Though I do understand Byunghun's frustration. Just about anyone's really! Even I would have lost it with all the confusion. (Though I'm slightly taking a liking for Chunji... his wit gets to me lol)
Hmm anyways let's see what happens next:O
Good luck for the upcoming updates ^^