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Black Paradise

 

R/N: I hope you enjoy the first chapter! It’s a bit slow I think, but it’ll pick up eventually! And I promise, this “life” let’s say doesn’t stay like this forever!~ Comments are always appreciated keke ~

(Byunghun POV)

“Yah, Changhyun hurry up!” Byunghun shouted, restlessly putting his feet up onto the glass table. He was at Changhyun’s house. They were supposed to go eat dukkbokki together at a local vender’s spot, and frankly, Byunghun was starving. Sliding his phone out from his jacket pocket, he checked the time. Ricky had been getting ready for over fifteen minutes. What the hell is that kid doing up there?!

Right when Byunghun was about to make another bellowing complaint to the younger boy upstairs to hurry up, the doorbell rang. “Hyung! Get the door!” He heard Changhyun’s faint order. Huffing, he shuffled to the front door, which was only a few paces away from the couch he was sitting at. Without bothering to check who it was, he opened the door.

In front of him was a boy, who looked about his age. His hair was a…purple? Red? He couldn’t tell. The boy was taller than him, and slim. Good-looking…Byunghun cleared his throat, momentarily diminishing his thoughts. He pressed his lips together and stared at the boy, hoping that the boy would make some move to tell Byunghun why he was here. Unfortunately for him, no sound was uttered from the other boy. He could see the boy running his eyes down Byunghun’s figure, and felt a bit flustered. “Can I help you?” Byunghun asked after a moment.

The boy immediately locked eyes with Byunghun again, before giving a smile. A smile with no humor, just one of amusement. “Changhyun asked me to come over. Said we were going to go eat.”

Byunghun blinked. Changhyun said that the two of them would go to eat dukkbokki together. Had he told this boy the same thing? “He’s upstairs.” Byunghun bluntly stated, stepping aside from his position in the doorway to let the other male inside the house. Without so much a thank you, the boy stepped inside and threw his shoes aside. Plopping down on the couch, he seemed to be making himself at home. “I’ve known Changhyun since elementary school but I’ve never seen you around before.” Byunghun said, awkwardly sitting as far away from the boy on the only couch Changhyun had in his living room.

To prevent his eyes from resting on the other boy again, Byunghun stared intently at the glass table, and the smudge his socks made when he had rested his feet on it earlier. “I have as well, and I haven’t seen you either.”

The other boy’s voice was…melodic. Soft? Byunghun rubbed his forehead with his palm briefly.

“I’m Lee Chanhee, by the way.”

From the corner of his eye, he could see the male turned to face him, a hand sticking out. Byunghun turned his head and shook Chanhee’s hand loosely, nodding once in acknowledgement. “Lee Byunghun.”

At that moment, the stairs started creaking. Changhyun was finally done. Realizing that Byunghun had held onto Chanhee’s hand for a second longer than he should have, he quickly snatched his hand away and cleared his throat, leaning back against the couch and watching the stair case. It might have been his ears playing tricks on him, but he swore he could have heard Chanhee let out a low chuckle.

Sure enough, the black haired boy descended the stairs, eyes lighting up when he saw both Chanhee and Byunghun sitting together…with a huge gap in between them on the couch. “Hyungs! Wah, you’re all here! But what’s with the space in between you guys, we’re all friends here!”

Byunghun was in a state of shock, and couldn’t properly process what Changhyun was saying. He was too focused on what was going on. His stomach felt all…jittery. You idiot, you held onto his hand! Get yourself together, Lee Byunghun. Get your together. He and Chanhee had just met. There was no way that there was some sort of attraction that was taking place. Besides, Byunghun had a girlfriend. I was thinking about something too long, and that’s why I forgot to let go of his hand. Meeting people always gives me jitters anyways. He mentally nodded at his thoughts. Besides, Chanhee was a guy. A guy! Byunghun scoffed at himself at his ridiculous behavior.

“Uh…Byunghun? We’re leaving now.”

The voice snapped him out of his thoughts as he looked up at the origin of the voice and found himself to be face to face with Chanhee. He could feel Chanhee’s soft breath tickle his mouth. Too close. Too close. Too ing close. For what seemed to be the hundredth time that day, Byunghun cleared his throat and scooted away from Chanhee, getting up and swiftly walking past the other male, walking out the already open door.

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NaKyon-Kyon
#1
UPDATE PLEASE
strafield #2
Chapter 35: Hey! Your new fan here, kkk~
I really really really like this story, i read all the chapters in one go since yesterday hahahahha
I like the plots and how much of a byunghun-centric this story is. coughs- its bottom byung too , im a total er for cute byungie xD
And i was actually looking forward to myungjoe making out- ops hahahahhahaha
And is it just me that not so secretly wanting chunji and byunghun to have some kind of feelings towards each other- damn how i love chunji's passive-aggresive personality XD
but but but the last time you updated this was 2014------- am i too late to beg for updates? :(
Please please please i beg you with cherry on top and byungie as extra cherries on top * ^ *
18succubus
#3
Chapter 35: Sorry got confused there with another story (abt the lawyer question ?)
18succubus
#4
Chapter 35: Wwaaaahhhh, what was that?!?! Got mixed emo with the story. Who is chorong in chunji's life? Byunghun is really that goddam handsome, even chanhee's twin liked him! How's byunghun's parents, are they safe from mr. Hwang? How's chunjoe's schooling? How will byunghun become a lawyer? When will they have again???? hahaha~ i can't wait to know where will this story go. Update, pls
chunjixbyungie
#5
Chapter 35: YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING ME !!!!
YOU DIDNT JUST LEAVE WITH THE
WORST CLIFFHANGER EVER .
NO (┳Д┳)ಥ_ಥ
.....
Huff ok thnx 4 the update n looking 4ward to ur other stories bec i luv them.
Chanhees pov was heartbreaking
N so relate-able .
Its so sad he feels alone like no one understands him
Feeling he was a temporary thing was so SAD. God !!!
Byung is an idiot huhu .
I cant wait to see chanhees reaction.
I have a feeling he wouldnt just give in huhu .
chunjixbyungie
#6
Chapter 23: OMG ehem am i the only one shipping byung with chunji too ???
GOD !!!!
that was pure bless
how byunghun started hallucinating and he thought they could make their voice sound like woohyun omg
that was perfect .
it perfectly described his fear and everything oh god XD .
chunjixbyungie
#7
Chapter 19: this is gonna be a really long comment because im gonna write my opinion about the whole ch i read
which is few (i just discovered this yesterday or s o i thought )it seems i read it before bec in ch 7 before xD.

anyways i skipped through the ch and i read couple of ch and i came to this conclusion
I JUST LOVE THIS OMG !!!!HOW COME YOU MANAGE TO DO IT ???
LIKE OMG INFINITE AND TEEN TOP GOSH IM A PURE ANGEL AND INFINITE COMES RIGHT AFTER TEENTOP FOR ME.
CAN YOU IMAGINE MY FEELS ???? PLUS HYERI OMG !!! I LOVE HOW YOU DESCRIBED THAT EVEN THOUGH SHE'S NIEL'S COUSIN SHE GRADUALLY GOT CLOSER TO BYUNGHUN .
your writing is awesome, the vocabs , the phrasing , the interactions, how you managed to link all those characters together and still give them their roles and definite personality .. this is so damn hard.. it's really realistic and there's a huge load of humor xD .
chunjoe are killing me .. omg i love how you display their affection for each other and how they are cheesy not cliche
how chanhee missed byunghun's attention when hyunwoo was calling omg aaaah
& whenever byung got up chanhee held him still omg .
THIS CH is killing me !!!!
other than the fact your skills are great you made chanhee the dominting one OMG although at the end he rode him at the end i can never complain xD . IM a crazy hardcore bottomjoe believer xD .
so this was just too much for me it was an extra .. the was so unique and authentic srsly ????!!!!!!
i have nothing to say ..other than i now feel like having lol omg !!!!
i couldn't stop rereading it , my ipad was 7% and i couldn't bring myself to search for the charger !!!!!
other thing i love how you made it byung centered kind of .. i mean hoya omg and hyunwoo with byung !!!!!
how you made everybody fond of byungieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Now going forward, about miyoung and L aaaah omg that was one hell of a chapter !!!!
i can perfectly understand byung yet i can really relate to jonghyn's pov !, poor chanhee though .
Kyattchan #8
Chapter 34: "Niel furrowed his brows in confusion, a thought ringing in his head. He had to keep himself from gasping. Byunghun, Chorong, and another girl…Byunghun was having a !"
BEST PART EVER! XD
I'm really loving this story.. it has been a really interesting ride. From the first chapter it seemed like a cute and cool story and it keeps getting more and more intriguing. The whole twin twist showed up out of nowhere too but it just fit right in. Even tho Chunji is super evil and mean.. I can't help but also really like him and feel a tiny bit sorry for him (even tho he almost killed my L.Joe!! T_T). I'm such a too because I keep thinking about how a would go since they the last two chapters!
Oh! And maybe I'm just weird for asking (hoping) this but this is stuck in my mind and I need to ask! Is Minsoo showing up again any time soon? >_< I dunno why but even tho he hardly showed up in your story I'm wondering he will make another appearance soon..! It's kind of odd how I don't usually care much for him when stories are ChunJoe centric but for some reason he got stuck in my mind. O_o
Anyway... sorry for my ramblings. Just know that I'm LOVING the story! I hope to read an update soon~ :)
Kyattchan #9
Chapter 19: Damn.. that was hot.. Like twice hot because.. you know.. TWICE! Thrice if you count the bathroom scene! It was just very very good and hot!... I just needed to get that out.. :D *goes back to reading the story..*
TeenGez14Top
#10
Chapter 34: Byunghun and Chanhee nooooo.
Though I do understand Byunghun's frustration. Just about anyone's really! Even I would have lost it with all the confusion. (Though I'm slightly taking a liking for Chunji... his wit gets to me lol)
Hmm anyways let's see what happens next:O
Good luck for the upcoming updates ^^