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Black Paradise

 

R/N: Last update of the day T_T I want to upload the next chapter but I think I should write a bit more before uploading idk 

THE NEXT CHAPTER THO GUYS. CHUNJOE /SCREAMS OUT TO THE WORLD

Are these chapters too long? Should I make them shorter? Or are they too short? CRIES IDK

The five boys entered a pizzeria somewhere downtown. Byunghun wasn’t quite sure where they were. How am I going to get home

On the other hand, the other boys seemed to be having fun. Occasionally, the boys would help him enter the conversation, and he graciously added a comment and a laugh here and there. He appreciated their efforts of trying to include him, without being s.

Seeing the bright lights of downtown, the bustling people crowding the sidewalks and the line of cars waiting in the congested traffic seemed to send an unexpected wave of calm over him. He took in everything, rarely ever getting the chance to go to these parts of town.

The group had just snagged a table at the restaurant. Chanhee ushered Byunghun into the booth first, sliding in next to him. Mir, Changhyun and Woohyun squished together in front of the duo. The place was bright and cheery, people occupying almost every terrible. With red and orange lighting, a full length bar and fully self-serving salad bar, Byunghun almost thanked Chanhee for making him tag along. They were just talking about music editing software, and potentially creating a song.

“Byunghun, you do anything? Sing? Play an instrument?” Mir asked him, putting his elbows into the black table and leaning forward towards the quiet boy. Byunghun met the other boy’s eyes. He opened his mouth to respond, when Changhyun in.

“Our Byunghun can rap, compose, and play piano and the violin. He’s great!”

Byunghun shot Changhyun a look, and sheepishly smiled back at Mir, rubbing the back of his neck. “I’m not that great.”

Woohyun cackled. “You rap? Now that I think of it, your voice is pretty good for rapping. Mir was able to get us expensive- music software. We were thinking of tryin’ it out. You should join us for one of our sessions. You and Mir rapping would be pretty sick,” Woohyun smiled at the younger boy.

Byunghun nodded, suddenly getting excited when hearing about composing a song with the other boys. He felt an arm drape around his shoulders. “That’s our Byung,” Chanhee said in a sing-song voice, pulling the younger close to him. Byunghun turned his head to glare at Chanhee, before smacking his chest. “Get your arm off of me, you !”

“Ooh, feisty. I like that, Byung.”

“You wanna shut up now? I’ll punch your teeth out.”

Chanhee laughed, sliding his arm away. Meanwhile, Changhyun had been observing the scene unfold, biting his lower lip. If only he had went in with Byunghun, then he could have sat next to him. And seeing them bicker, he couldn’t help but wonder if Byunghun liked Chanhee. Byunghun was a skinship devil, he didn’t mind skinship. So why would he protest with Chanhee showed some? Either Byunghun liked Chanhee, or hated his guts. Changhyun hoped it was the latter. It was ironic how just a few weeks ago, he was determined to get the two to be comfortable around each other. Now that they were, he wanted them to hate each other. Well, how was he to know that he would develop feelings for Byunghun?!

Woohyun mocked surprise, gasping in a ladylike way before poking Mir. “D’you see that, Mir? Chanhee actually listened to someone! We have found our lion tamer! Congratulations Lee Byunghun, you win!”

Byunghun scoffed, smirking. “So what’s my prize? This goof?” Byunghun, without glancing at the older, smacked Chanhee on the arm. “No thanks,”

Chanhee faked a sob. “B-but Byunghun, my love! My  heart, my heart is shattering,”

Changhyun clenched his fists under the table.

Mir burst out laughing, clapping furiously in hilarity. “Hey, Changhyun. Those two are hilarious, don’t you think?” Mir asked the younger boy, elbowing him. Changhyun blinked. “What? Oh, yeah. Hilarious,” Changhyun said, trying to seem as upbeat as possible and even throwing in a fake laugh. Mir was in another round of fits, patting Changhyun’s back.

Changhyun couldn’t help but be a bit paranoid. Did Mir know? About Changhyun’s feelings? Was that why he just pat Changhyun’s back? 

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NaKyon-Kyon
#1
UPDATE PLEASE
strafield #2
Chapter 35: Hey! Your new fan here, kkk~
I really really really like this story, i read all the chapters in one go since yesterday hahahahha
I like the plots and how much of a byunghun-centric this story is. coughs- its bottom byung too , im a total er for cute byungie xD
And i was actually looking forward to myungjoe making out- ops hahahahhahaha
And is it just me that not so secretly wanting chunji and byunghun to have some kind of feelings towards each other- damn how i love chunji's passive-aggresive personality XD
but but but the last time you updated this was 2014------- am i too late to beg for updates? :(
Please please please i beg you with cherry on top and byungie as extra cherries on top * ^ *
18succubus
#3
Chapter 35: Sorry got confused there with another story (abt the lawyer question ?)
18succubus
#4
Chapter 35: Wwaaaahhhh, what was that?!?! Got mixed emo with the story. Who is chorong in chunji's life? Byunghun is really that goddam handsome, even chanhee's twin liked him! How's byunghun's parents, are they safe from mr. Hwang? How's chunjoe's schooling? How will byunghun become a lawyer? When will they have again???? hahaha~ i can't wait to know where will this story go. Update, pls
chunjixbyungie
#5
Chapter 35: YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING ME !!!!
YOU DIDNT JUST LEAVE WITH THE
WORST CLIFFHANGER EVER .
NO (┳Д┳)ಥ_ಥ
.....
Huff ok thnx 4 the update n looking 4ward to ur other stories bec i luv them.
Chanhees pov was heartbreaking
N so relate-able .
Its so sad he feels alone like no one understands him
Feeling he was a temporary thing was so SAD. God !!!
Byung is an idiot huhu .
I cant wait to see chanhees reaction.
I have a feeling he wouldnt just give in huhu .
chunjixbyungie
#6
Chapter 23: OMG ehem am i the only one shipping byung with chunji too ???
GOD !!!!
that was pure bless
how byunghun started hallucinating and he thought they could make their voice sound like woohyun omg
that was perfect .
it perfectly described his fear and everything oh god XD .
chunjixbyungie
#7
Chapter 19: this is gonna be a really long comment because im gonna write my opinion about the whole ch i read
which is few (i just discovered this yesterday or s o i thought )it seems i read it before bec in ch 7 before xD.

anyways i skipped through the ch and i read couple of ch and i came to this conclusion
I JUST LOVE THIS OMG !!!!HOW COME YOU MANAGE TO DO IT ???
LIKE OMG INFINITE AND TEEN TOP GOSH IM A PURE ANGEL AND INFINITE COMES RIGHT AFTER TEENTOP FOR ME.
CAN YOU IMAGINE MY FEELS ???? PLUS HYERI OMG !!! I LOVE HOW YOU DESCRIBED THAT EVEN THOUGH SHE'S NIEL'S COUSIN SHE GRADUALLY GOT CLOSER TO BYUNGHUN .
your writing is awesome, the vocabs , the phrasing , the interactions, how you managed to link all those characters together and still give them their roles and definite personality .. this is so damn hard.. it's really realistic and there's a huge load of humor xD .
chunjoe are killing me .. omg i love how you display their affection for each other and how they are cheesy not cliche
how chanhee missed byunghun's attention when hyunwoo was calling omg aaaah
& whenever byung got up chanhee held him still omg .
THIS CH is killing me !!!!
other than the fact your skills are great you made chanhee the dominting one OMG although at the end he rode him at the end i can never complain xD . IM a crazy hardcore bottomjoe believer xD .
so this was just too much for me it was an extra .. the was so unique and authentic srsly ????!!!!!!
i have nothing to say ..other than i now feel like having lol omg !!!!
i couldn't stop rereading it , my ipad was 7% and i couldn't bring myself to search for the charger !!!!!
other thing i love how you made it byung centered kind of .. i mean hoya omg and hyunwoo with byung !!!!!
how you made everybody fond of byungieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Now going forward, about miyoung and L aaaah omg that was one hell of a chapter !!!!
i can perfectly understand byung yet i can really relate to jonghyn's pov !, poor chanhee though .
Kyattchan #8
Chapter 34: "Niel furrowed his brows in confusion, a thought ringing in his head. He had to keep himself from gasping. Byunghun, Chorong, and another girl…Byunghun was having a !"
BEST PART EVER! XD
I'm really loving this story.. it has been a really interesting ride. From the first chapter it seemed like a cute and cool story and it keeps getting more and more intriguing. The whole twin twist showed up out of nowhere too but it just fit right in. Even tho Chunji is super evil and mean.. I can't help but also really like him and feel a tiny bit sorry for him (even tho he almost killed my L.Joe!! T_T). I'm such a too because I keep thinking about how a would go since they the last two chapters!
Oh! And maybe I'm just weird for asking (hoping) this but this is stuck in my mind and I need to ask! Is Minsoo showing up again any time soon? >_< I dunno why but even tho he hardly showed up in your story I'm wondering he will make another appearance soon..! It's kind of odd how I don't usually care much for him when stories are ChunJoe centric but for some reason he got stuck in my mind. O_o
Anyway... sorry for my ramblings. Just know that I'm LOVING the story! I hope to read an update soon~ :)
Kyattchan #9
Chapter 19: Damn.. that was hot.. Like twice hot because.. you know.. TWICE! Thrice if you count the bathroom scene! It was just very very good and hot!... I just needed to get that out.. :D *goes back to reading the story..*
TeenGez14Top
#10
Chapter 34: Byunghun and Chanhee nooooo.
Though I do understand Byunghun's frustration. Just about anyone's really! Even I would have lost it with all the confusion. (Though I'm slightly taking a liking for Chunji... his wit gets to me lol)
Hmm anyways let's see what happens next:O
Good luck for the upcoming updates ^^