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Black Paradise

 

“I had fun last night at the restaurant, Byung,” Chanhee smirked, leaning against the locker next to Byunghun’s. Byunghun pulled out his textbook before slamming his locker shut, eying the older.

The two stared at each other in silence for a while, before Byunghun spoke. “Last night was a mistake,” He replied coldly, walking past Chanhee down the nearly empty hall, heading towards his class. “Aw, come on Byung don’t be like that! I had fun!” Chanhee happily said, walking backwards in front of the younger so he could see his face.

Byunghun avoided Chanhee’s eye contact, biting his upper lip. He couldn’t believe he let Chanhee do that to him. He didn’t put up a fight. He just gave the reaction Chanhee had wanted. And how, how in hell, could Miyoung’s name not even popped up once in his head while the whole thing was going down? All he could ing thinking about was how good it felt—how good it felt when Chanhee touched him, how good Chanhee’s lips felt on his skin. Needlessly to say, he was in a deep sense of denial, refusing to acknowledge that it really happened. It was a dream. We’re talking about a dream. I’m thinking of a dream. It didn’t count. I didn’t do anything. Nothing happened.

“Lee Byungun!”

Byunghun’s body tensed at the familiar female voice, pausing in his tracks. Chanhee stopped in front of him and sighed, crossing his arms over his chest.

“Omo, Chanhee-ah! You two sure hang out a lot!” Miyoung gave another eyesmile, clapping her hands with a laugh. Behind her was Taeyeon. “Yes. We had a great time yesterday, didn’t we Byunghunnie?” Chanhee asked Byunghun, smirking at the younger boy.

Byunghun had to keep himself from snapping the older’s neck right then and there. He already felt guilty as it was, he didn’t need a reminder. “You should get to class, noona. You’ll be late,” Byunghun gave Miyoung a small smile before giving a small nod, ditching Chanhee, Miyoung and Taeyeon and heading to his class.

****

“I was thinking a solid one two beat at the beginning that’ll be prominent throughout the entire song. You’ll come in first with a light, low rap until the pre-hook. It’ll have a nice techno feel, but we won’t use any auto tune on the voices. Chanhee will do his thing at the pre-hook and then the chorus, which will be sung by Chanhee, Changhyun and me. Mir will do a rap after that, Changhyun will do the pre-hook, chorus again. We could have countermelodies in the instrumental side that complement each other, and it could be really climactic and exciting. For the middle eight, I was thinking, something significantly slower, with a bit more of a soul feel, y’know? I’ll do that. Changhyun can do the harmonizing,” Woohyun explained to Byunghun, pointing at scribbles on what was once a clean white sheet of paper that had been abused with black and blue ink. 

Byunghun nodded, taking some time to absorb Woohyun’s vision in his head. “After the middle eight, we can do the chorus. And then after that, the chorus again with a higher pitch, so you guys can sorta show off the notes. In the background of that, Mir and I can do a bit of rapping to counter that,” He suggested, taping the tip of his pencil on certain scribbles made by Woohyun on the sheet.

Woohyun grinned, pressing the paper onto a desk and writing in another set of notes.

Byunghun watched Woohyun write his suggestion down, a smile forming on his face. He was proud of himself—a contribution he made would actually me going into the song. His happiness was quickly replaced with shock when he felt arms wrap themselves around his waist. Miyoung always went out for lunch with her friends, it couldn’t be her. Changhyun would never be so intimate with him, Woohyun was in the same room as him writing stuff down. It was either Mir, or Chanhee. And oh how Byunghun desperately wished it was Mir.

“What are you guys doing? Did you guys eat?”

Byunghun jerked his elbow back, creating contact with Chanhee’s ribs. Chanhee whined a bit, pulling away as he rubbed the skin over his ribs. Moving away from him, Byunghun walked beside Woohyun, inspecting what the other male was writing. “Yeah, we ate a while ago. We’re working on the song, it’s coming together,” Woohyun triumphantly, putting down the pen and handing the paper to Byunghun to let him read what he wrote.

“How did my Byung do? He any help?” Chanhee asked, snickering. Byunghun took his eyes apart from the paper to cuss at the other boy, before scanning the sheet with writing to find where he had left off.

“Yeah, actually. Byunghun knows a hell of a lot more and gives better suggestions than you ever did,” Woohyun snorted. Byunghun burst out laughing, holding one hand up to give Woohyun a high give while still scanning through the page. Woohyun gladly slapped his palm against the younger’s, flashing a grin in Chanhee’s direction.

****

“What are you doing tonight, Byung? The boys and I are gonna watch a movie at Woohyun’s place. Wanna come?” Chanhee asked at the end of the day, once again leaning against the locker next to Byunghun’s and waiting for him to gather his things.

Without hesitation or a moment of thought, Byunghun declined. “No.”

“What? Why not? The guys really like you!”

“Are you going to be there?”

“Well of course. It isn’t a party without Lee Chanhee.”

“Okay, my answer is now a definite no.”

****

Woohyun had asked Byunghun again in place of Chanhee, pleading with his disgustingly greasy aegyo to try to get Byunghun to go. And just because he didn’t want to withstand another round of Woohyun’s grease, he agreed. Mir cheered, slamming his fist into the locker in victory. Changhyun pressed his lips together in a thin line. Would he witness another moment between Chanhee and Byunghun? And would the other guys stop being so oblivious to realize what’s going on?

“So when Woohyun asks you, you agree, but when I ask you, you flat out said no? I’m hurt Byung, hurt!” Chanhee clutched his heart in false hurt. Byunghun gave him a smack upside the head. 

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NaKyon-Kyon
#1
UPDATE PLEASE
strafield #2
Chapter 35: Hey! Your new fan here, kkk~
I really really really like this story, i read all the chapters in one go since yesterday hahahahha
I like the plots and how much of a byunghun-centric this story is. coughs- its bottom byung too , im a total er for cute byungie xD
And i was actually looking forward to myungjoe making out- ops hahahahhahaha
And is it just me that not so secretly wanting chunji and byunghun to have some kind of feelings towards each other- damn how i love chunji's passive-aggresive personality XD
but but but the last time you updated this was 2014------- am i too late to beg for updates? :(
Please please please i beg you with cherry on top and byungie as extra cherries on top * ^ *
18succubus
#3
Chapter 35: Sorry got confused there with another story (abt the lawyer question ?)
18succubus
#4
Chapter 35: Wwaaaahhhh, what was that?!?! Got mixed emo with the story. Who is chorong in chunji's life? Byunghun is really that goddam handsome, even chanhee's twin liked him! How's byunghun's parents, are they safe from mr. Hwang? How's chunjoe's schooling? How will byunghun become a lawyer? When will they have again???? hahaha~ i can't wait to know where will this story go. Update, pls
chunjixbyungie
#5
Chapter 35: YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING ME !!!!
YOU DIDNT JUST LEAVE WITH THE
WORST CLIFFHANGER EVER .
NO (┳Д┳)ಥ_ಥ
.....
Huff ok thnx 4 the update n looking 4ward to ur other stories bec i luv them.
Chanhees pov was heartbreaking
N so relate-able .
Its so sad he feels alone like no one understands him
Feeling he was a temporary thing was so SAD. God !!!
Byung is an idiot huhu .
I cant wait to see chanhees reaction.
I have a feeling he wouldnt just give in huhu .
chunjixbyungie
#6
Chapter 23: OMG ehem am i the only one shipping byung with chunji too ???
GOD !!!!
that was pure bless
how byunghun started hallucinating and he thought they could make their voice sound like woohyun omg
that was perfect .
it perfectly described his fear and everything oh god XD .
chunjixbyungie
#7
Chapter 19: this is gonna be a really long comment because im gonna write my opinion about the whole ch i read
which is few (i just discovered this yesterday or s o i thought )it seems i read it before bec in ch 7 before xD.

anyways i skipped through the ch and i read couple of ch and i came to this conclusion
I JUST LOVE THIS OMG !!!!HOW COME YOU MANAGE TO DO IT ???
LIKE OMG INFINITE AND TEEN TOP GOSH IM A PURE ANGEL AND INFINITE COMES RIGHT AFTER TEENTOP FOR ME.
CAN YOU IMAGINE MY FEELS ???? PLUS HYERI OMG !!! I LOVE HOW YOU DESCRIBED THAT EVEN THOUGH SHE'S NIEL'S COUSIN SHE GRADUALLY GOT CLOSER TO BYUNGHUN .
your writing is awesome, the vocabs , the phrasing , the interactions, how you managed to link all those characters together and still give them their roles and definite personality .. this is so damn hard.. it's really realistic and there's a huge load of humor xD .
chunjoe are killing me .. omg i love how you display their affection for each other and how they are cheesy not cliche
how chanhee missed byunghun's attention when hyunwoo was calling omg aaaah
& whenever byung got up chanhee held him still omg .
THIS CH is killing me !!!!
other than the fact your skills are great you made chanhee the dominting one OMG although at the end he rode him at the end i can never complain xD . IM a crazy hardcore bottomjoe believer xD .
so this was just too much for me it was an extra .. the was so unique and authentic srsly ????!!!!!!
i have nothing to say ..other than i now feel like having lol omg !!!!
i couldn't stop rereading it , my ipad was 7% and i couldn't bring myself to search for the charger !!!!!
other thing i love how you made it byung centered kind of .. i mean hoya omg and hyunwoo with byung !!!!!
how you made everybody fond of byungieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Now going forward, about miyoung and L aaaah omg that was one hell of a chapter !!!!
i can perfectly understand byung yet i can really relate to jonghyn's pov !, poor chanhee though .
Kyattchan #8
Chapter 34: "Niel furrowed his brows in confusion, a thought ringing in his head. He had to keep himself from gasping. Byunghun, Chorong, and another girl…Byunghun was having a !"
BEST PART EVER! XD
I'm really loving this story.. it has been a really interesting ride. From the first chapter it seemed like a cute and cool story and it keeps getting more and more intriguing. The whole twin twist showed up out of nowhere too but it just fit right in. Even tho Chunji is super evil and mean.. I can't help but also really like him and feel a tiny bit sorry for him (even tho he almost killed my L.Joe!! T_T). I'm such a too because I keep thinking about how a would go since they the last two chapters!
Oh! And maybe I'm just weird for asking (hoping) this but this is stuck in my mind and I need to ask! Is Minsoo showing up again any time soon? >_< I dunno why but even tho he hardly showed up in your story I'm wondering he will make another appearance soon..! It's kind of odd how I don't usually care much for him when stories are ChunJoe centric but for some reason he got stuck in my mind. O_o
Anyway... sorry for my ramblings. Just know that I'm LOVING the story! I hope to read an update soon~ :)
Kyattchan #9
Chapter 19: Damn.. that was hot.. Like twice hot because.. you know.. TWICE! Thrice if you count the bathroom scene! It was just very very good and hot!... I just needed to get that out.. :D *goes back to reading the story..*
TeenGez14Top
#10
Chapter 34: Byunghun and Chanhee nooooo.
Though I do understand Byunghun's frustration. Just about anyone's really! Even I would have lost it with all the confusion. (Though I'm slightly taking a liking for Chunji... his wit gets to me lol)
Hmm anyways let's see what happens next:O
Good luck for the upcoming updates ^^