Ice

Slave Heart

Minho's P.V.

"Oh Minho-ah you are awake?"

"Hy...hyung....I....I can't stay here...I need to leave. I need to get out..."

"Minho-ah....what are you talking about?"

"I can't do this. I'm going crazy! I can't stay here!"

" Minho-ah calm down! What are yoiu talking about, why can't you stay?"

 

I couldn't keep it to myself anymore. I needed to say it out...

 

"Min...Min....Minhyo-ssi..." I hadn't said her name yet. The moment it left my lips my body trembled...

"Minhyo-ssi I ...I can't stay here...I can't do this..."

He must have seen me shaking because he helped me sit over at the table.

"What do you mean you can't do this? Whats it got to do with Minhyo-ssi?"

I couldn't say anything. My eyes were burning with the threat of tears, and my throat swelled up into rock, making it imposible for me to swallow my own siliva.

"Minho!  Is it because she is black! Is that the reason? I CAN'T BELIVE YOU!"

He didn't get it...I laughed

"Hyung...I...I..."

Looking up at him, the tears fell over

"I...I love her...HYUNG! I LOVE HER! I've gone crazy! What...what do i do? What do i do! HYUNG SAVE ME! TELL ME! WHAT DO I DO!"

"Minho-ah...you have to calm down..."

I was squezzing his hands, shaking them, pleading with desperation.

"HYUNG!"

"Minho you will wake the others...do you think it will be good if they all find out?"

I stopped shakeing him and yelling. I just stared at him. Tears fell from my eyes endlessly...

"Hyung...I can't...I can't stay here...I feel like i will be crazy soon..."

"Minho-ah, if you leave the director will want to know why, what will you tell him?"

I kept staring at him

"There is no way you can avoid her...She will be with us for six months...are you going to leave SHINee for six months?"

He was right...but what am i supposed to do!

"Hyung..." I didn't have enough strength to speak.

"Hyung...I'm scared...I'm so scared of what i will do...Do you know that i feel completly empty..."

"What do you mean by 'empty'?"

"So empty, my soul is looking for her room. Something keeps pulling me toward there. It's like I'll never be happy...until i have her in my arms."

My gaze shifted from Onew hyung, to the dirrection of her section of the house.

"The more i fight it...the stronger it gets...hyung...what do i do?"

I looked back at him with wild eyes

"I will help you okay. I will help you keep it a secret...when ever you feel like its too much, like now, come to me. But you can't talk about leaving again...okay."

I barely nodded my head, i was exhausted to speak. Hyung gave me some tranquilizers and helped me to the extra room. I feel into a deep unreliving sleep.

 

Onew's P.V.

What kind of situation is this? I knew something like this would happen sooner or later...but i didn't think Minho would be first...and it happened to him so fast...too strong. (sigh) Well what can we do? He'll have to endure it for a while. He can't abandon SHINee, he wouldn't...would he?

 

Minhyo's P.V.

I awoke the next morning to laughter in the kitchen.

"Hmmmm so it wasn't a dream," I smiled to myself.

All of the scenes from yesterday replayed in my head. Then i remembered the way Minho looked at me...he is the only one that hasn't spoken to me...not a word. My heart sank.

"He must really not like me..." (sigh)

I got up and opened the door, Minho passed right at that second. He didn't even glance at me...

"That conferms it...he hates me, but why?"

I was hurt. Why does he dislike me so much? I quickly walked into my bathroom. My heart stopped when he passed by..No..I promised my self i wouldn't do this again. Why does this always happen to me? Somehow i always seem to fall head over heels with people that despise me or treat me badly...It's the worst pain you can imagine.

"No..Minhyo...he wont even look  at you."

I splashed some water on my face...

"You will just end up hurt by yourself in the end...snap out of it."

                                            

 

Minho's P.V.

I woke up with a huge headache, there was laughter coming from the kitchen.

"I wish i could be as carefree as them."

I remembered yesterday and pain shot through my chest...Cold...i have to be cold. This has to stop...I will just ignore her as much as i can, pretend she isn't here. Block her presence from my conscience, that way i won't make any mistakes...and fall deeper. I got out of bed and headed to the bathroom. As if GOD himself were trying to mock me, Minhyo opened her bedroom door just as i was passing by. My gaze stayed straight ahead, I passed her without saying anything. Once i reached the bathroom, i closed my eyes and slid down the back of the door.

"How am i going to do this?"

My heart felt like it wanted to explode.

                                     

                                   

Onew's P.V.

Key and Taemin was making breakfast, and Jonghyun and I were setting the table. I went back to the kitchen to get the rice, and saw Key put a bunch of salt in a cup of water...

"ssshhhhh" devil

Oh no what is he planning to do with that...

"Taeminie, here...you've worked hard, have some water.." :)

Taemin doesn't know anything and naively accepts poison...

"Ah gomawoyo.."

He drinks....

"BAHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAA!!" crying He was spitting and gagging everywhere. We all exploded in laughter.

"AH! KEY HYUNG!"

I looked up from what i was doing to see Minho walking toward the bathroom. At that same moment Minhyo opend her bedroom door. he didn't look at her at all, the scene was so cold. It sent chills through my body. I looked at Minhyo. Tears were wheling up in her eyes. She must think Minho hates her. I'm sorry Minhyo, but there is no other way.

 

Author's P.V.

After everyone washed up and had breakfest (Minho and Minhyo sat as far away as possible, both not really eating) they set out to the studio to meet up with the Director.

Onew: "Hi Director."

Director: "Ah hello everyone...hello Minhyo-ssi." :)

Minhyo: " Annyeonghaseyo.."

Director: "We have a project we want you participate in. Minhyo, who's part of the Lucifer dance did you learn?"

Minhyo: "Min..Minho...oppa's.."

Minho shifted in his seat.

Director: "Good! Here is the deal...In three months SHINee has a big concert. I want you to take Minho's place on stage...Minho, you and Minhyo will work together. You must teach her your style. Don't be bad to her!"

Onew's P.V.

Ohno...what is this! Why did she have to learn Minho's part? Why is she taking his place on stage! How is he going to do this? This means they will both have to work closely together...this is crazy. What kind of fate is this. I have to figure out a way to stop this somehow, but what can i do?

"Di...Director..."

 

 

Sooo if there is anyone reading this....Please give me some feedback, subscribe,comment. I have a couple more chapter written, its just i feel that no one is reading my story or cares enough to give me feedback. So I'm really disscoraged to update the story. It feels like..."I'm doing all this writing, but no one likes it...or reads it." So please if you read please let me know what you think, also please don't just look at the first page decide you don't like it, and cease to continue. That what i feel is going on, and it's really discouraging. So share :)  heart

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whateveritis #1
Chapter 19: did you did that pic?
killthemall #2
Chapter 19: this is pretty good and i'm touch!
SweetMya
#3
I'm in with this story it's so good. i hope you finish it. update soon PLEASE!
Rini6189
#4
The interaction between Taemin and Minhyo is cute. A man dressed up as a clown and practically screaming his head off as he chased after them is a hilarious scenario to witness. Minhyo's got a point about Taemin not understanding her situation since he had never fallen in love before. The pain that both Minho and Minhyo are experiencing is really depressing. It looks like they are really in need of emotional/moral support from the people around them. If only there's something that the rest of the SHINee members could do to help. Jonghyun's the only one oblivious to the reality of the situation--being happy-go-lucky without a care in the world. First, they'd have to reveal the truth to him. Minho does look like he's torn fron the inside-out here. Since Minho had been cold towards Minhyo since the beginning, it's hard for her to get over that and truly accept him with her heart. So, this is the price he pays for mistreating her. Still, her love for him won't go away. It did prevent her from letting him kill himself by heavily drinking. Hopefully, things would work out between the two of them with time. This is really depressing to read. It does hurt to see them suffering so much.
Rini6189
#5
Please don't take this the wrong way. I don't mean to bash your writing this way. It's just constructive criticism given to improve the quality of your writing. I don't have a problem with your writing style. Some of the mistakes did throw me off track. <br />
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Ch. 18 mistakes:<br />
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1. Instead I put some meat in Minho's plate.<br />
Correction: Instead, I put some meat on Minho's plate.<br />
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2. It's awkward to see the phrase "messagine my cheeks." The correct verb to use is "massaging." <br />
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3. I looked at him distress.<br />
* The perposition "with" is missing" before "distress."<br />
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4. Taemin skipped to the song TRICK by Girls Generation on the CD player and turned to me expectedly.<br />
Correction: expectantly<br />
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5. Loosing my patients I got off her bed and pulled her out of the bathroom<br />
Correction: Losing my patience<br />
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6. The pain and jealousy were thrashing in my veins each trying to take the dominate role<br />
Correction: dominant<br />
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7. Taking a deep breathe I broke into a sprint.<br />
Correction: Taking a deep breath, I broke into a sprint.<br />
* "Breathe" is a verb.
Rini6189
#6
It has been a while since I last read this. Though, I haven't forgotten about the essence of this story.<br />
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It's a matter of time till Jonghyun finds out the real truth behind Minho's recent behavior. He seems to be diagnosed with the condition of being lovesick. Hopefully, Minho and Minhyo would try to work things out together. It is the groups' concern when at least one of their fellow teammates isn't feeling well. They need all the support that they can get. Later, they would have a bigger problem to face: having Minho's secret revealed to the public. I wonder how their management company would handle this. It could be passed off as a rumor. There are people who stir things up through gossip to catch the interest of others.<br />
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Chapter 17 mistakes:<br />
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1. His whole body tensed and you looked back at Onew with nervous eyes. <br />
* It seems like the attention is drawn towards the readers where the "you" is inserted. That should've been "he" instead since Key was referring to Minho.<br />
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2. Then Onew stared at me with an un-readable expression....<br />
* Generally, a hyphen is not needed between the prefix and the actual word.<br />
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3. "The only way I can do that is staying as far away from you as possible."<br />
* The preposition "by" should be added before "staying."<br />
Rini6189
#7
Since Lee's out of the picture, she no longer has to deal with him and his hurtful words. I'm aware that Taemin still feels bitter towards Minho for mistreating her. Taemin truly loves and cares for Minhyo that he'd do anything just for her to be happy. The feelings that he has for Minhyo are making him overwhelmed. It seems like a curse because of the way he's suffering from it. Getting drunk doesn't help the situation at all. The problem will only go away when the person confronts it and does something about it. That's when the weight will be lifted off the shoulders. Onew's the only one who knows the truth about Minho not really being himself...up till now. It looks like Key might be able to get some answers from him. Since he's so deep in sleep, it's unlikely that he'd be waken up from his nightmare. I hope it'd be a happy ending for all of them. <br />
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The words in yellow aren't easy to see, especially on a bright monitor. It does put pressure on the eyes to have to squint in order to read it. It's best not to use colors that are look very too bright.
faithimnida
#8
YAY UPDATES!!!!!!! even though this chapter was sad :( <br />
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Taemin really cares about her!! It's really sweet! Both Minho and Taemin worry about Minhyo! Buuuuuttt<br />
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GIVE US A HAPPY CHAPTER !! LOL much love!
your_coffee_bean #9
Update!Update!Update! I'm sooooo in love with this story. I hope you update soon :).
Rini6189
#10
Jonghyun seems to be the only one having the least involvement from what I remember reading in Chapters 1-12. It's good that we finally get to see things from his perspective. Another plus is that you've gained three new subscribers. ^^ Good for you! <br />
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It's a relief that the vision that left us hanging in the previous chapter isn't real. Poor Minho is worried sick now...almost like he's awaiting for the apocalypse to occur. Onew's fitting into his position well as their leader. He seems like the kind of person that any of his teammates--Minho, in this case--can turn to whenever there's a problem that some well-thought advice is needed to help cope with the situation/circumstances. That shows his care for the well-bing of his fellow teammates. It looks like Taemin hasn't forgiven Minho after the way he treated Minhyo. So, it could take a lot for him to be convinced. The lie that Minho came up with won't last long once they (minus Onew) get to the bottom of it and figure out his actual problem. I wonder what Minhyo would tell them about Taemin.