Rescue

Slave Heart

Taemin P.V.

I went into the practice room to check on Minhyo. What the heck is wrong with Minho, why is he ignoring everyone?

"Minhyo Nonna did you guys fini...." My sentence trailed off seeing her state...She was standing in the middle of the dance floor, fist balled, and she was crying.

"What happened? Whats wrong!"

She wouldn't answer me. Instead she just kept quietly sobbing. I went up to her and hugged her. What did Minho do to make her cry? I felt bad...

"It's okay Nonna don't worry about him. He's really weird sometimes..."

She nodded...

"Hey how about we go for some dukbokki and ice-cream?"
 

She stopped crying and looked at me happily.

" *HAHAHA* Okay go shower and change, and we can go out , okay?"
"Alasseoyo." :)

 

Minhyo P.V.

YAY! Taemin-ssi is taking me out to eat spicy rice-cakes! I've always wanted to try them. So I hopped into the shower and dressed as fast as i could, throwing on my hoddie, shorts and boots. I didn't even bother to dry my hair. I just tied it up in a messy bun. Even though Minho was being unreasonably mean to me, I was still excited to get to bond with Taemin.(He is sooo adorable..kekeke =P) I opened the door and Taemin was impatiently waiting there.

"Nonna! You ready!"
"Neh!" :)

He took me by the hand (*blush*) and lead me to the living room.

"Hyungs! I'm taking Minhyo out for some food. We will be back later."
"Aww I wanna come!" Jonghyun Oppa tried to tag along but Taemin shut him down.
"NO."

Jonghyun :frown *pout*

I started laughing, and Taemin looked at me in surprise, making me nervous.

"Minhyo Nonna..."
"Wha...What?"
"Your laugh is so adorable...You never really laugh around us....It's the first time I'm hearing it...."

I looked at everyone else in the room. They were all staring at me in shock. immediately I blushed. All of a sudden Taemin hugged me really tight.

"Taemin-ssi..." He hugged me tighter...
"I...I...can't breathe!"
"Oh, sorry...It's just...I'm really happy! *grin*" :D
"Okay lets go!" He grabbed my hand again.
"Hyungs see you later!"

Within a flash we were out of the door. He was still holding my hand (*blush blush blush*)

"Tae...Taemin-ssi...my hand...."
"Oh sorry." =p

He let my hand drop and put his in his front pockets. Then a repulsive gurgling sound came from somewhere deep in my stomach...(embarrassing...)

"Ooooh HOoooo see what happens when you don't eat."

I pouted * frown*

 

Taemin P.V.

I'm so unbelievably happy! Haha! Minhyo is hungry, her stomach was growling really loudly

"Ooooh HOoooo see what happens when you don't eat."

She pouted in response to my scolding. And for some reason it made me even happier. It was just like when she laughed in front of the Hyungs and I. *sigh* I am so happy it feels like i have the rays of the sun beaming out of me in all directions.

"Taemin-ssi why are you sighing?"
"Oh *kekeke* its nothing." I was grinning
"Oh here we are!"

We got in and ordered enough dukbokki for two. When we got our food Minhyo immediately began to eat, only stopping to say "WWaaaaahhhh delicious!" I didn't feel like eating, she was enjoying it so mush I felt it would be a crime to take even one from her. Kekeke she eats so cutely. She just shoves everything in at once. By the time she finished eating, she developed the worst hick-ups from eating to fast. Apparently shes had the habit ever since she was born. Kekeke shes so funny.

"Nonna lets have some ice-cream!"
"Okay...but..."

She got all worried looking...

"What? Whats wrong?"
"I can't have ice-cream, I'll have frozen yogurt. I've already eaten to much."
"Oooh are you watching your weight?"
"NO *haha* though i should. (I'm Fat =P) I am a diabetic, too much sugar is like poison for me."

I was shocked! My heart started to race. I knew someone whos grandmother went blind because of complications from her diabetes. How can Minhyo be sick! She looks so healthy, and she hasn't been eating well for the past week!

                                                                           

"NONNA! Why didn't you say something earlier! You haven't even been eating well! What would we do if you get sick!"
"I didn't want you guys to worry about me too much. I can eat almost anything, I've just got to watch my proportions and take my meds."
"And have you been taking your medicine?!"
"Yes! Taemin calm down!"

I realized I was being totally frantic. Taking a couple of deep breathes I smiled...

"Okay, lets go get your yogurt."
"YAY!" :)
"Wait for me here, I will be back..."

I went to the corner store and got some ice-cream and yogurt. I didn't know which one Minhyo would like, so I took a chance and got the banana flavored (mostly because I like it :) ) When I left the store Minhyo was sitting on a bench across the street. I jogged over to her.

"Here!" I handed her the banana yogurt.
"Thank you." She grinned
"I love BANANA!"
" *haha* Me to!"
"Yea I kinda figured with your many bottles of banana milk during the day...which I will confess to sneaking a few..."
"AH! NONNA!"

 

                                                    

Sitting next to her I opened my frozen strawberry-pop

"Cheers?"
"Cheers!" We touched our deserts together.
"Taemin-ssi..."
"Neh?"
"Why did you hug me so tightly...you know...earlier...?"
"Oh *haha* its because I was really happy." :)
"About what?"
"Well, in truth, I thought that you didn't like it here with us. You've barely been eating or talking."
"Ooh..."
"I thought maybe you weren't adjusting so well to Korea, so I was worried."

Looking back on this afternoon, I got shy thinking about when I impulsively hugged her...

"So when you laughed with us this afternoon, and blushed, I thought 'She doesn't dislike us!', So I hugged you....Sorry about that..."
"Thats okay..."

Her eyes were downcast, the smile disappeared from her face.

"So if you don't dislike us...what is it?" I remembered the way Minho blamed her for his drunkenness...

"Is it Minho?"

She bit her bottom lip letting her head hang lower...Trying to hide her moistening eyes.

"CHAM! What did he do to you this afternoon to make you cry?"

Putting the yogurt in , she shook her head. Determined not to reveal anything to me. My fist clenched, this whole situation was making me angry. Just what did Minho do?

"Minhyo Nonna, please ...don't keep things to yourself. What happened?"

She looked up at me, her eyes were full of tears.

"Minho doesn't like me..."

Her head fell back to its hanging state over her now dripping yogurt...

"He doesn't want me...here..."
"Don't think about him, he is really cold sometimes."

She looked up at me again, this time tears fell over-

"But...it really hurts...apayo..."

 

                                                                              

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whateveritis #1
Chapter 19: did you did that pic?
killthemall #2
Chapter 19: this is pretty good and i'm touch!
SweetMya
#3
I'm in with this story it's so good. i hope you finish it. update soon PLEASE!
Rini6189
#4
The interaction between Taemin and Minhyo is cute. A man dressed up as a clown and practically screaming his head off as he chased after them is a hilarious scenario to witness. Minhyo's got a point about Taemin not understanding her situation since he had never fallen in love before. The pain that both Minho and Minhyo are experiencing is really depressing. It looks like they are really in need of emotional/moral support from the people around them. If only there's something that the rest of the SHINee members could do to help. Jonghyun's the only one oblivious to the reality of the situation--being happy-go-lucky without a care in the world. First, they'd have to reveal the truth to him. Minho does look like he's torn fron the inside-out here. Since Minho had been cold towards Minhyo since the beginning, it's hard for her to get over that and truly accept him with her heart. So, this is the price he pays for mistreating her. Still, her love for him won't go away. It did prevent her from letting him kill himself by heavily drinking. Hopefully, things would work out between the two of them with time. This is really depressing to read. It does hurt to see them suffering so much.
Rini6189
#5
Please don't take this the wrong way. I don't mean to bash your writing this way. It's just constructive criticism given to improve the quality of your writing. I don't have a problem with your writing style. Some of the mistakes did throw me off track. <br />
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Ch. 18 mistakes:<br />
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1. Instead I put some meat in Minho's plate.<br />
Correction: Instead, I put some meat on Minho's plate.<br />
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2. It's awkward to see the phrase "messagine my cheeks." The correct verb to use is "massaging." <br />
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3. I looked at him distress.<br />
* The perposition "with" is missing" before "distress."<br />
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4. Taemin skipped to the song TRICK by Girls Generation on the CD player and turned to me expectedly.<br />
Correction: expectantly<br />
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5. Loosing my patients I got off her bed and pulled her out of the bathroom<br />
Correction: Losing my patience<br />
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6. The pain and jealousy were thrashing in my veins each trying to take the dominate role<br />
Correction: dominant<br />
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7. Taking a deep breathe I broke into a sprint.<br />
Correction: Taking a deep breath, I broke into a sprint.<br />
* "Breathe" is a verb.
Rini6189
#6
It has been a while since I last read this. Though, I haven't forgotten about the essence of this story.<br />
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It's a matter of time till Jonghyun finds out the real truth behind Minho's recent behavior. He seems to be diagnosed with the condition of being lovesick. Hopefully, Minho and Minhyo would try to work things out together. It is the groups' concern when at least one of their fellow teammates isn't feeling well. They need all the support that they can get. Later, they would have a bigger problem to face: having Minho's secret revealed to the public. I wonder how their management company would handle this. It could be passed off as a rumor. There are people who stir things up through gossip to catch the interest of others.<br />
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Chapter 17 mistakes:<br />
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1. His whole body tensed and you looked back at Onew with nervous eyes. <br />
* It seems like the attention is drawn towards the readers where the "you" is inserted. That should've been "he" instead since Key was referring to Minho.<br />
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2. Then Onew stared at me with an un-readable expression....<br />
* Generally, a hyphen is not needed between the prefix and the actual word.<br />
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3. "The only way I can do that is staying as far away from you as possible."<br />
* The preposition "by" should be added before "staying."<br />
Rini6189
#7
Since Lee's out of the picture, she no longer has to deal with him and his hurtful words. I'm aware that Taemin still feels bitter towards Minho for mistreating her. Taemin truly loves and cares for Minhyo that he'd do anything just for her to be happy. The feelings that he has for Minhyo are making him overwhelmed. It seems like a curse because of the way he's suffering from it. Getting drunk doesn't help the situation at all. The problem will only go away when the person confronts it and does something about it. That's when the weight will be lifted off the shoulders. Onew's the only one who knows the truth about Minho not really being himself...up till now. It looks like Key might be able to get some answers from him. Since he's so deep in sleep, it's unlikely that he'd be waken up from his nightmare. I hope it'd be a happy ending for all of them. <br />
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The words in yellow aren't easy to see, especially on a bright monitor. It does put pressure on the eyes to have to squint in order to read it. It's best not to use colors that are look very too bright.
faithimnida
#8
YAY UPDATES!!!!!!! even though this chapter was sad :( <br />
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Taemin really cares about her!! It's really sweet! Both Minho and Taemin worry about Minhyo! Buuuuuttt<br />
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GIVE US A HAPPY CHAPTER !! LOL much love!
your_coffee_bean #9
Update!Update!Update! I'm sooooo in love with this story. I hope you update soon :).
Rini6189
#10
Jonghyun seems to be the only one having the least involvement from what I remember reading in Chapters 1-12. It's good that we finally get to see things from his perspective. Another plus is that you've gained three new subscribers. ^^ Good for you! <br />
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It's a relief that the vision that left us hanging in the previous chapter isn't real. Poor Minho is worried sick now...almost like he's awaiting for the apocalypse to occur. Onew's fitting into his position well as their leader. He seems like the kind of person that any of his teammates--Minho, in this case--can turn to whenever there's a problem that some well-thought advice is needed to help cope with the situation/circumstances. That shows his care for the well-bing of his fellow teammates. It looks like Taemin hasn't forgiven Minho after the way he treated Minhyo. So, it could take a lot for him to be convinced. The lie that Minho came up with won't last long once they (minus Onew) get to the bottom of it and figure out his actual problem. I wonder what Minhyo would tell them about Taemin.