Dark Paradise

Behind Those Hazel Eyes

 

Da-young’s Pov

 

I watched the flames spread everywhere, they were getting closer and I couldn’t move. I was terrified, my breathe was getting shorter and shorter, that’s when I saw him, standing in front of me with his hand held out, I couldn’t see his face but his eyes were glowing. He looked at me, withdrew his hand and started to walk away from me, I saw as his silhouette was getting smaller and smaller. Something inside of me told me I couldn’t let me him leave, I use all my strength to get up and race towards him. I was so close to him, my finger tips could touch the fabric of his coat when everything went black.

I couldn’t see anything, my fear started growing again, and it was taking over me. It felt like I was back in the corner of my room, covering my young and innocent eyes and ears from the chaos outside my bedroom. I vividly hear the screams of pain coming from my mother. I couldn’t take it anymore when I hear someone call out my name, it had been a while since anyone had called me by it, and I thought I had forgotten the sound of my name. I could feel someone shaking me and calling my name then it stopped.

I slowly got up and begin to walk towards the voice, it was a female’s voice but it didn’t belong to any women I knew, it wasn’t my mother or my aunt; it was softer but filled with concern. Who was this woman? How did she know my name? I tried to listen carefully when I heard a male’s voice, I knew that voice too, and it belongs to last person I saw before closing my eyes. As I got closer to their low and hush voices, my feet started to feel extremely hot, it almost stop me from getting any closer. I closed my eyes, took a deep breath and was about to continue when an intense thump cause my eyes to flutter open to a whole new scenario.

 

Mi Rin’s Pov  

Beautiful dreams. Today, I was in a garden filled with roses, red roses to be exact. I was sitting there when something caught my eye. He was here again, standing with his back to me in his hand one of the most beautiful roses I had ever seen. As I got up, he turn to face me and held out the rose, I wanted to take it but I couldn’t see his face and his eyes send shivers down my spine. He let go of the rose, started to walk away and without my consent my feet followed until I was in complete darkness. The feeling of being lost grew inside of me. I didn’t know where to go but something told me to keep walking, so I did.

My gut was the only thing I could trust right now and it was telling me to walk, so I kept walking until I saw a reddish white light. I started to move faster and faster towards it when a large heat wave hit my cold body, I stopped. My body seem to tense up with the newly found source of heat like it sense some sort of trouble. I could smell smoke, I could hear people running away, and I could feel cotton between my fingers. But I wanted to see, I wanted to know what cause of all this mess was.

All I could make out was darkness after more darkness, it was getting even hotter and all I could picture was the plane crashing down. I could feel fear and adrenaline kicking in all at once; I could see my father’s hand on my telling me to be brave. I saw his eyes slowly closed as my eyes started to do the same; they were interrupted by a loud thud. My eyes flew open and grew wider at the scene before me.

 

Sa-rang’s Pov

Another hallway, I had been walking and sometimes even running towards the end of each hallway but instead of finding an exit, I would find the beginning of another hallway. I could barely feel my feet when I bumped into something or better yet someone. This someone was a young man who kept his back towards me, I was about to apologize when he raised his hand and signal me to listen. However, I didn’t hear anything, the hallways was filled with an eerie silence that gave me the chills.

 I looked at the young man, he signal me to listen again, I was about to tell him I couldn’t hear anything when he turn to look at me with glowing eyes, his eyes were so bright, I could barely see his face. His face was just a dark shadow to me when I heard it. My name was been called out, he turn away from me and started running towards the end of the hallway, I didn’t know if I should follow him or not.

As if my feet had a mind of their own I started to run, I was scared but what was the worst that could happen, another hallway. I was almost at the end of the hallway when I fell down, I fell down a pitch black hole, I knew I should be afraid of falling into God knows where but I wasn’t, I felt free. A freedom I never thought I would feel again, free from the world, free from my responsibilities and free from even myself.

Then I heard something, I heard a noise, maybe the one the young man told me to listen for. I could hear a small child crying, I saw the fear on its face, I wanted to hold him but before I could reach for him, a bomb blow up in front of him, I could feel all the emotions I felt that day rushing back, I wished I could have saved him like I did everyone else. That day, I felt sick, sick to my stomach as I continue to fall into a raging heat; it was hot and dried as I reach my destination.

It was still pitch black but I could sense the heat taking over my body, I wanted it to stop, I need it to stop, when I opened my eyes to flame filled room and two other female silhouettes.  

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Nuest17exo #1
Chapter 19: I can't explain my happiness!!!! WHO. IS. WATCHING. THEM?!?!? Wow. Thank you for leaving me with that huge question. I really love it. A lot.
Thanks for updating and please update soon!!!
Nuest17exo #2
Chapter 18: NO!!!! They can't kiss |:( GET OUT OF THE TRANCE RIGHT NOW!!!!! Those two are taken!!
I get it!!! The things behind the HAZEL EYES that are (?)
Please update soon!! Fighting~!
Nuest17exo #3
Chapter 17: Awe~!! Poor Seunghyun! He isn't her partner...
Wow. Miss Busy Bee, you are very surprising in each and every chapter. You're such an amazing author!! Thanks for updating and please update soon!! Fighting~!
Nuest17exo #4
Chapter 16: *sobs*....Ji-an...... Seunghyun!!!! Is he gonna kiss her, then she'll miraculously wake up?!? *smiles* hehee~ the girls have finally opened up to them after that evil "child(Giovanna)" died!! (She did right?)
This story really shows the different feels and emotions towards the reader. Good job:) thanks for updating and please update soon!! Thanks for calling me out too!! Tell me whenever you need some inspiration, and I'll be more than glad to help and
comment:D smile. Fighting~ !
Nuest17exo #5
Chapter 15: I think you should update as soon as you can and that the twist at the end.... Is AMAZING!!!! Well done. *applause* you're in the top 3 of best authors whose stories I've read on AFF.
Daesung's doing a great job at figuring out whys going on.
Where will the girls go though?
gemmaflame #6
Chapter 15: Update please! I LOVE the twist of the story!
huskyvoicemale #7
Chapter 15: taeyang!!! ^^
Nuest17exo #8
Chapter 14: PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!! My favourite girl is Da-young but my favourite couples are JiYong+In-an and Seungri+Da-young. You're welcome. I'll be waiting~ I love your story!! Smile:) Fighting~!
Nuest17exo #9
Chapter 13: You're welcome:) Finally!! Someone poured their heart out. Who's next? Argh~!! Oh well. Can't wait for te surprise!! Fighting~!
gemmaflame #10
Chapter 14: UPDATE! !! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! !!