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"When I heard your voice, I thought I was dead," Baekhyun said on the phone. "Your voice is from heaven, aren't you an angel?"

Ryujin rolled her eyes. "You took a crash course in flirting while you were in a coma?" 

He chuckled, making her smile. "I was just explaining how it was to be in a coma and wake up from it."

She shook her head. "Be ok as soon as possible and come back. I'm scared to race alone..."

"Yes ma'am!" He laughed. "But aren't you too tired to race?"

"What? No... I had a good night sleep, I'm ok. Why should I be tired?"

"Because you've been running through my head till morning."

"You have definitely changed, this is not the Baekhyun I know," She said. "What other nonsense you've got? Tell them all..."

He chuckled. "You got to take my place now that I'm not there! Ok?"

"Yes, I know..." She whispered. "Just rest and wait for the result."

"Wait? I'll be watching the race!"

She ran her fingers through her hair. "Fine. I got to go."

"Fighting!" 

She ended the call and walked to the team members. "So," She handed Suzy her phone. "Let's get an award." She covered her face and wore her helmet.

"Go pass them all, Ryujin Jung..." Irene patted her shoulder.

She nodded. "I will..." She walked towards her car. 

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"YEAH! Did you see her, hyung?!" Baekhyun clapped when Ryujin passed the finish line and won the second place. "She is the second! She is fantastic! Isn't she?" He looked at his stepbrother and went quiet. Junmyeon was looking out of the window without any reaction. "Oh..." He remembered how his brother had avoided talking to him all that time.

The older man sighed and turned to the TV. "Yeah... she is talented."

"Huh?"

"You know, Baekhyun-ah, I was really scared that you wouldn't wake up. I didn't want to talk because I knew I wouldn't be able to stop scolding you." He went to him and sat on a chair. "My dear little brother, I don't want you to get hurt..."

"Hyung..." Baekhyun mumbled, feeling the tears rolling down his face. "Are you for real?"

"Of course," He turned to him. "Since the day we became brothers."

"I thought you hated me back then..."

"I've never felt that way," He took his hand in his. "I've liked you like my real brother, whom I don't have. You know what I like about you the most, Baekhyun?"

"My pig-headedness? My shouting or fighting? Or... my teenage moody behaviors?" He laughed. "I don't have anything likeable..."

"You yourself, that you are alive and you are breathing... that you are talking nonsense like before..." Junmyeon ruffled his head. "Take care of yourself... please..."

Baekhyun smiled. "Yep..."

■■■

"Baekhyun!" The racers ran to each other when they saw one another in the airport. Ryujin jumped into his embrace.

"Ouch..." Baekhyun's eyes widened. 

 "You saw me?"

He nodded and caressed her hair. "Yes... you were amazing."

She giggled and pulled away. "I know," They started walking. 

"Thank you..." Baekhyun suddenly said. 

The girl looked up at him. "Huh? Are you talking to me?"

"Yes..." He mumbled. "Thank you for not giving up and for fighting for your dreams," He said. "It might seem like I don't like you, though... I'm really happy that I met such a badass girl like you."

She smiled and took his hand out of blue, making his eyes widen. "I am also really proud and blessed to be in the same team as a champion like you."

He smiled as well and they started moving their locked hands like kids. "Let's visit Venice, huh?"

"I've been there with my dad... but I love the idea."

 

Jongdae, Suzy, Johnny and Sehun were walking behind them. "Look at them... how can they be so childish like that. That man is already thirty!" The American engineer said.

"People go loco when they fall in love," Sehun commented, making everyone turn to him. "What? Is that wrong? Almost everyone knows that they have feeling for each other!"

Jongdae clapped. "I said it! I said they'll fall for each other, didn't I, John?"

"You did!" He answered excitedly.

"Hmm..." Jongdae chuckled. "And you don't know what I know..."

"What is it?" Suzy asked. 

He shook his head. "No. No. I'm not going to expose them..."

"Hey... stop it, hyung. Just say it. They've kissed?" The Korean engineer asked

He laughed. "I don't know if they have."

"Hug?"

"Confess?" 

The boys kept asking questions, though Suzy rathered leave them. 

"You ok?" Lisa asked. 

"Yeah..." She sighed. "I just regret that I lost him."

"Hey..." Irene nudged her slightly. "You two weren't made for each other. If you hadn't broken up that way, it would have happened in another way," She said. "And by a strange twist of fate, Ryujin Jung happened. Making him change his attitude and behaviors."

The doctor nodded in agreement. "Just wait, you'll meet your own Mr Right."

She nodded. "I hope so..."

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Baekhyun was choosing what to wear. It was difficult for him for an unknown reason. He used to choose outfits so easily, though now he was acting like it was a matter of life or death. "Damn it..." He cursed under his breath. 

"What is it?" Jongdae walked out of the bathroom, drying his hair. "Do you need help?" He sat on the edge of the bed. 

The racer shook his head, as he took out some of his shirts out of his suitcase. "I don't need help, I just don't know what to wear." 

"Oh..." He smirked. "Byun Baekhyun is worrying over grooming..." He chuckled. "Dress to impress, huh?"

He looked at him with eyes wide open before glaring at him. "Impress whom? I just want to wear something suitable for-"

"Say it tonight..."

He looked up at him. "What?"

"Confess your feelings and let it out..."

He sighed. "But how?" Baekhyun sat on the floor completely. "I've thought about it a lot, though... I think it will be weird. All we do is bickering and disagreeing with one another. I feel my confession will end up in another fight."

Jongdae sighed. "Just say what you feel at the moment. Don't plan for these things and... come on! It's not your first time, Baekhyun..."

He sighed and took out one of his shirts. "I think this is good, isn't it?"

The latter took his phone. "You are handsome whatever you wear..."

He laughed. "That's Junmyeon hyung, not me."

The personal assistant rolled his eyes. "Yes, I know he is really handsome, but hey! You got to be more confident about your appearance! Have you seen people's comments below your posts?" He asked. "You are loved by lots of people all around the globe!"

"But not by my own mother..." He whispered to himself before closing the suitcase.

■■■

Ryujin looked around as her teammate was talking to a man, who seemed to be a boat owner. "It is as beautiful as it was..." She smiled. 

"Ryu!" Baekhyun called. "Come here!" He got on the boat carefully. The girl walked closer, but didn't know how to get on the boat. "Take my hand..." He held his hand towards her. 

Ryujin smiled and took his hand before stepping into the boat. Their chests touched for some seconds which made the younger racer blush. She didn't know the reason why, though she could feel her heart beating faster. "Th-thank you," She let go of his hand and they sat next to each other, with little space between their bodies.

The boat started moving. Ryujin sighed as she put her earphones on. She connected it to her phone and searched for a song. She stared at the water and houses around as she listened to the song. 

"Is she your girlfriend?" The man asked. "Huh?"

Baekhyun shook his head. "Not yet," He replied. "But soon she will..."

"Though... she doesn't seem ok."

Baekhyun raised an eyebrow and turned to the girl. Her eyes were closed as her tears rolled down her face. "Ryujin?" She turned to him. "What are you listening?" He took one of the earbuds and put it in his ear. It was familiar, Love Is Ouch by 2NE1. "Why are you listening to this?" He asked in disappointment. "Are you still thinking about that ing Daniel?"

"I feel so broken, Baekhyun..." She said while crying. "My heart," She covered the left side of her chest. "My heart hurts when I think about it. He didn't even try to keep me! Why? Am I that worthless?"

"Stop it," He wiped her tears away with his fingers. "Forget him. He is not worth your tears..." He took her phone out of her hand and changed the song. "This one... Forever."

Ryujin smiled, hearing the sweet lyrics and the beautiful melody. "Girls' Generation?" She asked in English. 

"I'm a fan..." He replied simply.

"I thought you hate women..." She said.

"Well," He took her hand in his. "There can always be an exception," He said. "Like you..."

Hearing his sentence, she smiled. Though her eyes widened when he comprehended his sentence. She didn't expect that at all. "What?"

"I have seen untrustworthy and cheating women... the ones who break your heart and are mean... but you? You are way different, Ryujin. You are different in many ways," He said. "I may hate ninety nine percent of the women in the world, but you'll be that small one percent whom I love, adore and respect."

"Baekhyun..."

"If you accept to be my girlfriend, I will never let anyone make you cry. I promise," She just looked at him, stunned. "I am not that perfect man you have in mind, though... I'll try my best to become the man you want," He breathed deeply. "Now, will you accept me as your boyfriend?"

"Oh, Baekhy

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Teneky
702 streak #1
Chapter 24: 💗🌹💗🌹💗

Before I comment on the chapter in general, I must first say that I love Baekhyun in this one! He is a sweet boyfriend who always tries to complete his girl and make her smile! 🌹💗👌👍

Now, back to the topic. I will start with Irene and Yixing! I always found women who confess first to be brave because honestly, I would never be able to do such a thing! 👍👌😉 Either way, the cat was out of the bag, and for a moment Yixing was surprised. But after talking with his friends, he decided to follow his heart! 💗🌹👍👌😉😍

As for the media, media will be media.

In terms of Ruyjin and Baekhyun, I think they need to talk about what happened. I understand her as well, but Baekhyun meant no harm, so hopefully, they will talk it out.

P.S. - I'm sorry that it took me this long to finally read this chapter and comment. Life is keeping me busy. 😥😣

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anitaklr24
#2
Chapter 10: I knew it that her boyfriend was cheating on her.
Could it be that Park Jungsoo is going to be the villain in this story?
preciousloey61
42 streak #3
Chapter 24: Woah... glad that the racers are back to track again... so happy for them...baekhyun's rare cute boyfriend version...hehehe..cringe but still cute.. wow.. finally yixing-Irene and Johnny-Suzy couples..so happy for them....loved that the couples gave each other second chances... aww.. felt so bad for Ryu... she's really suffering and going through tough time... it's a hard time for her.. but maybe that's why baekhyun's trying his best to cheer her up...he maybe got emotional cause of that... hope they talk to each other about it... also everything goes well for them... so curious about yixing's mother's and ryu's father's reaction.... thank you authornim for updating....
Strawberry_Moon
#4
Chapter 24: I understand why Ryu is doing that, but she should move on, she's hurting Baek at this point
Teneky
702 streak #5
Chapter 23: 😍😍😍😍😍

This chapter was heartbreaking, there was no doubt about it. :(
It's not easy when one loses a baby, but Baekhyun was so sweet and stood by her side! ^^ There were even some funny moments between them and I loved the 'Bacon' part! *chuckles*

Love the chapter!

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preciousloey61
42 streak #6
Chapter 23: Aww.. knew it but wasn't ready for the sudden incident.. one of the heartbreaking moment of the story...hope they get to have ten more babies in future together... loved the way baekhyun comforted her and handled things so wisely.. it was also hard for him though.. felt bad that they had to go through such situation.. maybe it'll make their relationship more stronger and better than before...that was so unexpected from him maybe earlier but it was a rather new person..and it was so heartwarming...woah.. he declared it publicly..yea.. congrats to both of them.. I think ryu's father saw but didn't want to make it hard or uncomfortable for her to confess it at that moment... maybe he'll wait for them to confess it together at the right situation together... hair dying part was so cute and hilarious.. haha.. woah.. Irene go girl girl.. hope it turn out well.. and we get to witness double or maybe triple dated.. haha.. baekhyun-Ryu, Irene- yixing, Lisa-sehun..hehe... that would be more fun and more interesting... also woah Suzy really surprised me with her answer..but glad that she showed maturity and not the typical villainous aura.. I'm rooting for the couples..hoping for the best... thank you authornim for updating ❤️
Strawberry_Moon
#7
Chapter 23: Oh no, the baby 🥺
Also will it be a disaster if Ryu's father knows about their relationship?
Thanks for updating ☺️
Teneky
702 streak #8
Chapter 22: 😍😍😍😍😍

This chapter was an emotional rollercoaster there is no doubt about that! 👌🥺 First, we have Baekhyun and his sister who are visiting their mother and for sure, Baekhyun feels confused about all of it. His sister told him some details and that their mother would watch him from afar, so in general Baekhyun was able to learn something that he didn't know before. Sadly by the time they arrived, she was gone... *sighs* Then we have a video she felt for him, telling her side of the story and that was also something good, but emotional. 🥺

On the other side of the world we have Ryujin who is happy about the news of being pregnant!... but the ending scene... I really hope everything will be fine!

Amazing chapter!

😍😍😍😍😍
preciousloey61
42 streak #9
Chapter 22: The Ecole chapter was full of emotional ride of Rollercoaster.... glad that atleast baekhyun came to know about his mother's hidden real truth, secrets and finally about the baby... I think park jungsoo was behind all these.. so emotional, heartwarming but definitely heartbreaking chapter.. it totally broke my heart... specially the last part.. please not the worst.. both of them had gone through so many things and problems.. the baby was the only happiness they got after all these.. hope good miracle happens with the couple..they really deserve the happiness together with their baby and his whole family members... 😮‍💨😮‍💨😭😭😭😓😓😔😔😔😪😪🤧🤧🤧💔💔💔💔💔💔😔😔🥺🥺🥺😖😖😫😩😞😓😣
Teneky
702 streak #10
Chapter 21: 😍😍😍😍😍

Baekhyun and his girl are just adorable, there is no doubt about that! They are getting to know each other little by little and I love Baekhyun's answer about where he sees himself 10 years from now! It's adorable! 😍😉👌

As for his mother being in the hospital... we'll see what happens!

I enjoy this chapter and Irene is just hilarious, I swear!

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