Review done on May 3, 2018 for Bubbly G.S. 

Username: ELFantasyhand

Story Title + Link: Sleeping Sugmin and Sleepless Kyuhyun + https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/291605/sleeping-sungmin-and-sleepless-kyuhyun-kyumin-seokyu-sunsun-sleep

Story Description: Everyone like to sleep and need to sleep. But what if you or someone knew couldn’t sleep? Or slept and never woke up? What would you do? Kyuhyun can’t sleep and Sungmin can’t wake up, why?

Story Genre(s): Romance, Comedy, and Drama

Main Characters + Supporting Characters: Kyuhyun and Sungmin + Seohyun, Sunny, Super Junior, etc

Title (3/10): I’m not a fan of this title at all to be honest. I think it lacks luster as to storyline despite the fact that it basically summarizes the first half of the story. It really should be something that catches the reader’s eyes long enough to read the description and the forward.

Characterization (5/10): I am for one disappointed about the lack of meat on your characters. I wished your characters had more of a description and even a little of a back story. Like suddenly jumping from the time of the car accident with Kyuhyun and Seohyun’s confession just threw me off.

Themes (10/10): Themes were met.

Setting (3/10): The setting was basically non-existent. I didn’