Review done on March 2, 2017 for Bubbly G.S.  

 

    Username: pcys_legal_wife   Story title + Story Link: Messages   Story Description: Chanyeol is Baekhyun's senior and admirer. One day he decided that he should start reaching up to the smaller since it was his last year in their University. It all started with an anonymous text message that Baekhyun can’t keep himself off from replying to the stranger.   Genre: fluff, romance   Main Character(s) + Supporting Character(s): Baekhyun and Chanyeol + members of Exo

 

 

 

 

 

Title (5/10): Although the title does match the whole story, it’s plain and bit boring. There’s nothing unique about it really.   Characterization (5/10): All of your characters lack density. Every one of them is a flat and there’s not really a development of the story. It’s sad because I think this story could really be a good one to develop your characters considering it has to do with love.   Themes (10/10): I think you did a good job at keeping your theme throughout the story considering that you seemed to have written these chapters on a whim.   Setting (0/10): You don’t really have a setting. You don’t take anytime to say where the characters are at the beginning and you make weak indications in some chapters. It may seem such a tedious little task but from being in school to lying on his bed is a pretty fast transit. Unless Baekhyun is some superhuman like Superman who can go to one place in