Review done on July 6, 2017 for Bubbly G.S.

Username: PenguinLOvers772

Story title + Story Link: A Remedy To The Broken Soul + https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/878445

Story Description: Youngbae works as a therapist to treat a depressed girl Suhyun and in the midst of therapy, he tells her the story about his dread past with an involvement of a mysterious boy named Lee Seungri who changed his life forever

Genre: Angst, Depression, School life

Main Character(s) + Supporting Character(s): BIGBANG's Taeyang and Seungri + AKMU's Suhyun

Title (8/10): I took off two points because well the title really gives away the plot.

Characterization (8/10): You gave Suhyun too much of an emphasis as her being a flat character. She’s not much of a character so going really into detail is a bit pointless. I also wish you would put more emphasis on Seungri’s character seeing how important he is to the plot. 

Themes (10/10): I think you did an excellent job at representing depression. You gave the audience a point of view for them to be able to feel the character’s point of view.

Setting (0/10): You don’t really have a setting and I really can’t review something that doesn’t have it. 

Description and Foreword (9/10): I think the description is rather misleading honestly