Review done December 11, 2016 for Ethereal Darkness

Username: Natocuty

Story title + Story Link: Diary of a Recovering Bulimic + http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1010219/diary-of-a-recovering-bulimic-angst-infinite-myungsoo-romance-exo-sehun

Story Description: Bullied for being "overweight" by her peers and supposed "protector", Haneul starts taking drastic measures in order to fit in with society's ludicrous definition of beauty, Soon enough she find herself on the road of self-destruction. 

Genre: Drama, Angst, Slife of Life 

Main Character(s) + Supporting Character(s): Nam Haneul (OC), Oh Sehun, Kim Myungsoo + Sulli, Amber and others

Title 3/5:  Although it fits the story, it’s not really an attractive title. It’s very blunt and not saying “Hey come read me.”  I think that is the problem why this story does not have many subscribers which is a shame.

Description || Forward 5/10: Your description is not great.  If I look up your story I get is the quote. “So there you have it; my sorry tale. That's how something I thought I controlled ended up controlling me.”  Well that’s all well and dandy but why would I want to read this. Your description is like a second chance if your title isn’t great which in this case it isn’t. Don’t give me some melodramatic quote that I seem to see every other story.  Give me a reason to read this story.

Characterization 15/20:  The hardest characters to do in first person are the suicidal or the one with eating disorders. The author has to have the ability to make