Reviewer; Joolay

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Title: 3/5

It's straightforward. Immediately from the tittle, I knew what the story would be.

Poster: -/10

There wasn't a poster for the story so I'll grade this over 90 and deduct a mark when I convert it to a 100.

Description and Foreword: 7/10

Your description of the story was more of a foreword instead. The description should have been the author/narrator summarizing the story.

Your foreword was nice. It was a snippet of the story, but maybe you should have left out the part where Sungyeol said the dare. Have a little suspense, you know? But otherwise, the foreword was done well.

Plot: 8/10

It was so fluffy and cute! I really enjoyed reading it. I was smiling the whole way through when I was reading. It was nice, you wrote Sungyeol the way the choding should be, and it was short and sweet. But then again, was Jieun playing the game alone with Sungyeol? If she was, I don't think she should be praying that much, well, since the chances of her being chosen is 50-50.

Originality: 9/15

The game is more of a common plot, but you written it well.

Flow: 8/10

The flow was very nice, you didn't drag on with other dares/truths so it wasn't boring. 

Grammar/ vocabulary/punctuation/spelling: 18/20

I didn't spot any mistakes actually, except I felt that you should have put apostrophe for Jieun's thoughts. Just to make things clearer and neater. 

writing style: 8/10

I loved the way you write. You described things nicely, the feelings, the kiss. It was written well.

Overall enjoyment: 8/10

It was really nice! It was so fluffy, and I'm really fond of fluffy fics. I really think that your story's really great, and I'm going to put this up for recommendations. ;-p 

In all, 66/90 - 73/100.

I hoped this helped you in your writing and I wish you luck for your future works. ;-p

Hugs and kisses,

Joolay♡