[part i] - i.

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the first step | opening act

Pulling her bag over her shoulder, Minji lifted her eyes towards the sky and let out a puff of air. It was but another dull day reaching its end.

Slamming her car door closed, the gravel crunched underneath her feet as she walked through the car park. As she did so, she took in the absence of the sun and the heavy brew of clouds above. The earthy scent of the green around her filled her nostrils, signalling a drizzle later. In a matter of months, the rain will soon turn into snow.

Automatic doors parted for her entry, revealing the hallways of Seonu Academy. The lack of sunshine created a forlorn ambience, still shadows and chilling walls despite the hum of the heaters.

The fact that there were no students around didn’t help. This was because it was late, the day shifting to evening in just a few hours. Who would come to the Academy at this hour and weather? Only her.

And him.

From a few halls down, Minji could hear music playing. She was on time.

She halted outside a door, one very familiar to her. As per routine, she lifted herself on her toes and peeked, then, there he was. Beginnings of excitement sparked inside her chest, her heart in sync with the bass that was trembling the room.

His hands sliced through the air, swift but graceful. His form was firm but he was able to bend and stoop at will. His body was sturdy and he carried himself fiercely but his footfalls were light. His whole flow was agile and yet it was powerful and precise. He embodied passion and Minji has never seen anything so incredible.

This person has yet to disappoint her and she swore he wouldn't at all. She gave a smile as his dance slowed down to halt and he plopped himself down on the ground, sweat dripping. She caught the final moments of his practice, just like always.

Eventually, he stood and grabbed a water bottle from the bench and chugged it down. Sensing the end of the show, Minji began to pull away. Just before she did, she was granted a sight of him pulling his tank top over his head and she immediately jumped away, face burning.

That was not what she came for.

She began walking away from the room and reluctantly made her way to her own. Something sank inside her.

Was it shame? For being a regular but secret visitor? Watching and admiring him from a distance? Saddened because she hated him not knowing how much she was enthralled by him?

She was about to turn the doorknob of her own studio when she heard him close the door of his. Minji looked back. He was leaving, his worn backpack hanging on one shoulder. He was wearing his outside clothes, a hoodie and faded jeans.

Normally, she would’ve quickly ran into the room to avoid being caught but he couldn’t have this time, his studio is much closer to the exit. Oblivious to her presence, he walked the way she had come from.

Minji pitied herself. She had come to know little things about him, fascinated by each detail yet he never spared her much a friendly glance. She smiled bitterly as he disappeared around the corner.

Well, what can she do when Kim Jongin hated her very existence?

 

 

Every day after her class, Minji would practice.

You could say it was her only hobby. Coming from a high-class family, the expectations on her shoulders were demanding so things like maintaining perfect grades were her utmost priority—or so she was told.

Normally, people assumed academic brilliance to be part of the deal but no one ever really understood the rigours of the commitment and intense revision. It was easier to think the 'perfect daughter' had everything handed to her, natural as the air they breathed.

For Minji, this wasn’t the case at all and yet she allowed herself to be swept away by the currents of these expectations because it was easier to do so.

What she only sought in return was one thing, and that was dance.

Minji danced and she danced like there was no tomorrow because

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alcyonne
i just went over this and felt the feels. i cant believe its been two years or so since i finished this!

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_koda_reader_ #1
Chapter 32: Wow... This story was such a rollercoaster of emotions... You had me suffering until the last moment.
Definitely worthy.
Congratulations
Jinny_ #2
Chapter 32: Thank you for such a great story!
21bjsygstan
#3
Chapter 32: I want to be invited
BunnieUnnie
#4
I already voted for Aff author-nim~~kkk ^^
BunnieUnnie
#5
Chapter 32: What that's it!!?? Σ(っ°Д °; )っ ....(╥_╥) The ending was bittersweet! I am so happy that at the end of the day they are still friends! I'm wrong about Minyoung..I never thought that she would do that for Minzy...Yifan was the only selfish here~kk
And that bear scene! Hahaha Jongin we know that you are the cutest bear for Minzy she just want to tease you! (*´∇`*) but to be honest at first I thought he was the one who gave the bear to her~kkk ^^ another thing that I liked about this story is how you describe every detail in the story...two thumbs up!!...aaaah!!! I can't belive it is the end...Thank you for making us happy Author-nim!!!..I know I'm super duper late but it's better late than never (^___~)!* I'm Looking forward to read your other Minzy related stories here at aff! (*'▽'*)♪
BunnieUnnie
#6
Chapter 31: KYAAH!! Finally!! ヾ(〃^∇^)ノ!! I never thought I would see minyoung do it for her sister..thanks to Bom and Yixing!!!!( ≥﹏≤ ) After all the hardships that they go through..things are finally falling into place..they all deserved to have inner peace in their lives..I just wish that minzy's parents will be more forgiving and understanding now that minyoung will take minzy's place..thank you Yixing for helping these lovebirds..I'm sure you will find your "the one" someday, and I'm sure Minzy, Jongin, Amber, Krystal, and Luhan will be there for you too. (╥﹏╥)
BunnieUnnie
#7
Chapter 30: Ooh~~ are you ok Minyoung!? Hahaha! Minyoung didn't see that coming hahaha!..That confrontation in the previous chapter gave Yixing strength and helped him hold his ground when Minyoung tried to confront them...I'm happy that their friendship is slowly getting back to his old self and Minzy's effort to fix everything is paying off.....Minyoung and Yifan are so alike..both are greedy and selfish...Jongin and Minzy's moments are my fave <3 , he's so cute when he's jealous^^ ~~kkk
BunnieUnnie
#8
Chapter 29: I never thought that she can make yixing cry...I like how obviously jealous jongin was but he was able to control it and support his girl...and Minzy, girl..I know you are a superwoman but you need to rest too ^^
BunnieUnnie
#9
Chapter 28: I feel bad for yixing...his heart is filled with emptiness and loneliness..I hope yixing can overcome this and move on...he deserved to be loved too, If only yifan's focus is not revenge, things would have been diferent and maybe jongin, minzy ang yixing are still friends...well, I mean they are still friends but not like before :(
I hope yifan can see his brother as his real brother and not just a person who fulfill his plans,...I'm glad luhan and minzy is still checking on him...Yifan should be the one doing that because he is his real brother but I guess business is more important than his own brother...by the way, do you personally liked those piano pieces that yixing played or you did some research and specifically incorporate it?, because if it's the latter..kudos to you author-nim!!
SarahBlackjack #10
Chapter 32: AHHHHHH I can't believe it ended!! We definitely have come a long way. I wasSOOOO glad that Lay decided to stand up for Minzy and HIMSELF most importantly!!! Minyoung was definitely irking me in every way possible with her hypocrisy and obsess of making Minzy the perfect daughter just to cover up her past mistakes. My favourite part is when Minzy and Lay stood up for their freedoms and then Bom added more fuel to the fire BOM IS REALLY THAT B*TCH and finally, the KaiMinzy moments. Oh gosh, I really died when Minzy kissed Kai in front of everyone and the scene where he really got jealous bc of the teddy bear... I'm so relieved everyone can finally breathe. Good job and thank you for this wonderful fic <3 Thank you for constantly updating it I really appreciate all the efforts!! Would love to know what happened to Minzy in the past and I wanna see more Luna, Minzy and Krystal my girls!!