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 A muscular man stood outside in the pouring rain. His hand was raised up, preparing to knock on the door in front of him. He stopped. He probably shouldn't do this, the man thought. His hyung was too busy to care about his screwed up emotions. Just as he was about to turn around and walk back to his car, the door opened. 
  "Kook-Jong ah," Yoo Jae Suk called out over the clapping thunder and pelting rain. Jong Kook tured around. "Come inside! What are you doing out in the rain this late at night?" 
  Jong Kook mutely stepped into his hyung's house, mumbling his apologies at the same time. Jae Suk went to take a towel for his drenched-to-the-bone dongsaeng and made a warm cup of tea. Jong Kook thanked him and took a sip of the tea.  
  "What's wrong?" Jae Suk asked, concerned. He had known Jong Kook for a long time and Jong Kook definitely wasn't the type that would back away from a situation anytime-much less stand out in a heavy storm without an umbrella or coat at someone's front door. Jae Suk watched in silence as Jong Kook wrapped his hands around the mug, his eyes staring straight at the bottom of the mug. Jong Kook's fingers were almost blue from the cold and his face was pale. How long was he standing there before Jae Suk noticed someone at his front door and went there to check. Jong Kook finally took a deep breath. 
  "Hyung," he started. His voice came out soft and raspy. "I don't know how to explain this but i'll try my best." Jong Kook paused and Jae Suk nodded, encouraging him to continue. 
  "There's this feeling. Example when a friend calls you and admits that she was in love with another guy, and then suddenly you feel this pang, around the chest area. You don't what it is but like hell it hurts," Jong Kook whispered hoarsely. He looked at a loss. All this time, his eyes had never left the mug. 
  "Little brother," Jae Suk said gently. "It's called heartbreak."

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spartace5ever
and this isnt the last chapter ,, thrs still one/two more chaps after this and a sequel ? maybe hehe

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mushoo
#1
Chapter 21: Such a cute story, I really like how you wrote Ji Hyo. I enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing.
pink002 #2
Chapter 21: Hi! This is a beautiful story...thank you for sharing it with us. Had a smile on my face while reading it.
spadenoace #3
Chapter 21: AHHH HH this was so cute for some reason I adore the idea of JH having a date set out for some weird reason like I want to get married on the third of December like what a random oddly specific date and it's just so cute that the two of them are so cute
I feel like your writing style did get better over the three months you've worked on this so I'm very proud and very glad I read this. Thank you!
spadenoace #4
Chapter 18: Gkdkkgjf JH s response is so great omg I can totally imagine that sass though omg how adorable
spadenoace #5
Chapter 12: Aww this is so sweet!
spadenoace #6
Chapter 6: Aw this was a short but such a sweet chapter. Idk why but the thought of kind and gentle JS being very understanding and clasping a hand on shoulder and saying in a low tone the last words makes me melt
spadenoace #7
Chapter 4: [You pabo, i love you] The 'i' should be capitalized. Aw poor Jk
spadenoace #8
Chapter 1: I remember this awards show omgomg I A GOING TO PUT MY FOOT IN MY MOUTH OMG
Mithani
#9
Chapter 21: thank you for your hard working authornim :)
einsara
372 streak #10
Chapter 21: thank you for update....lovely ending...it's so beautiful n love it so much! thank you again for writing this story author-nim... appreciated it very much...hope to read ur new story soon...thank you again...