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AUTHOR: kailuvexo
REVIEWED BY: AmeYuki
TITLE: (4/5)
Your title isn’t common but it isn’t very unique and eye-catching as well. I also can’t see how it relates to your plot so far.
FOREWORD/DESCRIPTION: (9.5/10)
Your description was pretty well-written. It didn’t give away too much of the plot and describes the characters very well!.
A small suggestion is when you wrote how Jongin knew “he wasn’t all those things,” you should specify what “those things” were. -> Ex: “He knew that he wasn’t the person the rumors made him as . . .” When you state “all those things”, technically, you’re saying Jongin might not be good at sports or have a handsome charm either.
PLOT: (23.5/25)
Your plot isn’t the most original out there. Usually, a character meets his/her love interest who changes their life greatly like how Seoyeon is changing Kyungsoo’s life. But overall, the writing was very descriptive and lovely to read.
FLOW: (4.5/5)
Your story isn’t too slow or too fast; it’s a pace where readers can comfortably read and comprehend what’s happening.
GRAMMAR: (27/30)
Most of the mistakes made didn’t affect a reader’s understanding of the story. There were little issues with a missing comma here or there. There were also some spelling mistakes that should’ve been easy to spot in my opinion.Here are a few examples from the first
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