VOICELESS SCREAM

AUTHOR: KangminBread

REVIEWED BY: EXOcrux

TITLE: (4/5)

The title was related well to the story and it can be interpreted into different emotions that Youngwoon showed throughout. Seeing it without reading the story yet gave me a violent impression which was totally different from how it turned out to be. It was a good title, but not a very exciting one. It did not catch my eyes the first time and could easily be overlooked from hundreds of other titles in this site. You can just keep the title as it is but if you could think something with more pizzazz then that would be great.

FOREWORD/DESCRIPTION: (9/10)

The description was well written. No unnecessary questions imposed and I liked how it was done in the perspective of Youngwoon. It gave me a good insight on how his mind worked and how he viewed himself. One thing though that irked me was how the pronouns "he" and "him" were italicized. I felt that it was unnecessary to do so but it suited Youngwoon's emotion and how deeply affected he was by being touched.

I really loved the foreword. It gave enough excitement to make me proceed onto the first chapter of the story. Those few sentences were enough to stir my mind into building many scenarios as to what could have happened. I actually laughed aloud when I realized that none of my guesses were correct. Though I personally liked it, some readers might find that it did not really connect to the actual story. In fact, this is the only part where I had a glimpse of the action during Youngwoon's past. Still, it connected well to your foreword and created a solid introduction of your story.

PLOT: (22/25)

The plot was definitely interesting to me because I have always been a fan of psychological fics. I was used to seeing different kinds of disorders and your story wasn't the first one to use that phobia.