∗Review: Only For You∗
❋CANDY FLOSS REVIEWS❋ || Closed Until Further Notice ||ONLY FOR YOU
AUTHOR: KwonMirae
REVIEWED BY: EXOcrux
TITLE: (3/5)
To be honest, I did not feel an instant connection with the title. It felt bland and did not stand out from the hundreds of titles that I see in this site. It was also, to a point, cheesy. Although I understand that the title connected well with the story and it had been the recurring statement Soojung used throughout the fic, it was not something I would find myself clicking if there could be other options to try.
FOREWORD/DESCRIPTION: (8/10)
The foreword was short but it gave a good feeling of anticipation. I found myself interested in knowing why Soojung never believed in fairytales, and how Jongin made her believe in them eventually. There were some grammatical errors that I spotted which lessened the impact of the message for me. This kind of presentation was also a little on the overuse side, but nonetheless I still get hooked by them every time.
PLOT: (15/25)
I cannot really give you full points on the plot because it was simple; too simple in fact. The narration had been about Soojung supporting Jongin during the limited time that they had. That's all there was to it. It was a good thing for me; I liked how you rarely touched other things that weren't related to their moments and even tried to give us some glimpse of Soojung's life outside Jongin. The lack of descriptions and focusing primarily on their conversation also helped in makin
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