BEAST ET BEAUTY​

AUTHOR: KangminBread

REVIEWED BY: AmeYuki

TITLE: (4/5)

I could definitely see how the title relates to the story since Youngwoon is a werewolf, or “Beast”, and all, but is Sungmin really considered a beauty? Also, I suggest changing the “et” to English, or changing the whole title to French (The Beast and the Beauty, or La Bête et la Beauté). The title isn’t as original as it could be as well, but that’s alright since it is pretty hard to find an original, unique title. @(^_^)@

FOREWORD/DESCRIPTION: (7.5/10)

Starting with the description, I loved the quotes that you used. Although it was short, the quotes were very intriguing and definitely caught my attention.

Your foreword on the other hand was a bit confusing for me to understand. I had to go back and read it a couple of times to comprehend what was happening. But it did leave me wondering about Sungmin’s and Youngwoon’s story. Like how did they meet or how did their love progress? What happened to Kyuhyun’s family and such. I really wanted to click that next button and read the next chapter to know . . . so kudos for that. There are a few suggestions I would like to give to make the foreword more clear and easy to read along with some spelling and grammatical mistakes that I would suggest to change.

-“Kyuhyun pulled the dagger out in a trance. The werewolf growled lowly, but by the time Sungmin’s body fell down, the beast turned into a human male.” (A comma should be inserted here.)

-“The werewolf had pushed kyuhyun’s (-> Kyuhyun’s) mentor and the other hunter apprentice away.” (Kyuhyun’s should be capitalized.)

-“The werewolf was weak, disoriented for (-> from) the silver poisoning his blood. Kyuhyun had clean aim. He pushed Sungmin behind himself.” (Who is “he”? Is “He” Kyuhyun? Or is “He” the werewolf? Since you put “He” after introducing Kyuhyun again, for a second there, I thought Kyuhyun was the one that pushed Sungmin behind himself. In my opinion, you should just take out the sentence about Kyuhyun. It’s not necessary.

-“Why Kyuhyun didn't use his inhuman speed?” (-> Why didn’t Kyuhyun use his inhuman speed?)

-" ’Young master... please, don't... don't leave me... please, don't…’ The werewolf replied in between his cries. At that moment the beast looked so human.” You already mentioned at the beginning of your foreword that the werewolf turned into a human male so I don’t think this sentence is really needed.

-”The werewolf bent over the