∗Review: How Did We Get Married?∗
❋CANDY FLOSS REVIEWS❋ || Closed Until Further Notice ||HOW DID WE GET MARRIED?
AUTHOR: mirrue
REVIEWED BY: Meleodiseu
TITLE: (4.5/5)
I love the title. It's not too much different from the 'We Got Married?' titles, but the change just enough for me. The tone of the title is different and I don't know how to explain it, but it made me want to read more.
FOREWORD/DESCRIPTION: (8.5/10)
The description definitely caught my eye. Yes, it did seem a bit too cliché, especially with the last sentence. However, there aren't that many plots that are similar to yours and leaving the little hook on the end will attract potential readers.
PLOT: (22.5/25)
It definitely follows the arranged marriage cliché of “I don't want to get married to someone I don't know but my father is ordering it.” but you added your own twist to it, such as the reason for the marriage. The plot is definitely linear and doesn't hop all over the place, something that is quite refreshing to read. The actions of the characters are quite natural, like Jessica getting flustered and embarrassed when her father brought up her past pregnancy. The only thing that made me question some of it is why Jessica and Krystal weren't outwardly embarrassed by their father's childlike nature (perhaps they were used to it by now?)
FLOW: (5/5)
The flow of the story is natural, nothing moves too fast or too slow. You've found a good pace and stuck to it and it makes the story easy to read. I'v
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