∗Review: Solis∗

❋CANDY FLOSS REVIEWS❋ || Closed Until Further Notice ||
Please Subscribe to read the full chapter

SOLIS

 

​

 

AUTHOR:t0pslyfe

REVIEWED BY:babyorange

 

TITLE: (5/5)

The title works amazingly. The Latin is very creative way to draw readers in (and in my opinion, better than using just “Sun”)

 

FOREWORD/DESCRIPTION: (10/10)

It’s short, sweet, and hints at the plot without revealing too much. Just perfect for a foreword!

 

PLOT: (22/25)

I’ve seen this plot before, but I’ve never seen such a twist on it. Usually in other stories, the main character would let the “soulmate” replace the sun for the vampire, but your version is much more interesting to read (and much more angsty as well). At first, I was kind of d

Please Subscribe to read the full chapter
Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!
Author's Thoughts
AmeYuki
||Calling caching12
Read More →
Back to Top ↑

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
StoicBread #1
Hi ^.^! Do you accept affiliations request? If so,
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1123113
caching12 #2
Chapter 26: I didn't expect such a high score tho lol. Thanks for the review! Will credit later when I'm on PC.
sunflowerpots #3
Chapter 25: thank you for the review!!^^
kjdzyx #4
Chapter 23: thank you so much for the review!!! :D :D I was trying out new writing style with this fic so these feedbacks are really important to me! and thank you for spotting those grammatical mistakes >.< I tend to mess up grammar often...
but may I ask that you mentioned "lack of necessary articles like 'the'", but I couldn't find where I need to put 'the' in the fic. Yes Ii have re-read it but I guess I still don't know where I've missed out the word?
anyways I really appreciate the review! It's very helpful and I am glad I request from you :) have a nice day~~
JaeKnight #5
requested for a review! Merry Christmas! <3
Manlyluhaniie #6
Requested for a review ^^
sunflowerpots #7
I've requested for a review!!^^
mistressdean #8
Chapter 22: Because it is crucially important to me, THANK YOU SO MUCH for the grammar section. I didn't get a beta-reader because I'm doing the editing myself over winter break and didn't want to waste anyone's time to comb through my story, so thank you for this.

LOL. No, in Chapter 000, this was only an exaggeration about Jungkook, but I can't blame you for taking it seriously though. The sarcasm was subtle. Anyways, for that reason, Jungkook hasn't moved up in school (like Sheldon from Big Bang Theory, that lil smart haha). Yes, Jungkook is smarter than most, but he's not a certified genius and it's why he treats his position in school with contempt.
I'm sorry. I don't explain my characters to reviewers like this because it sounds like I'm "defending" myself, but I wanted to point out that TDoJ is strong in its exaggeration. Haha.

No, I'm not offended at all! Not about the cliché-ness, not about the long chapters, none of that. I embrace the cliché-ness, tbh. Plus, I know there are chunks I could cut out of the story (which is what I'm doing right now. Lord help me.), but other than that, I'm used to this reaction and I like the different perspectives. Honestly, it flatters me that despite everything said in your review, you found great enjoyment in my story while remaining a critical reviewer throughout it. (Okay, I'm sorry for this feedback that isn't really feedback.)

At last, thank you for your corrections, advice, and time! I will have a second pair of eyes to help me after I do the first round of editing. Thank you for the honest and critical review and I'll credit right away! If any troubles or questions arise, I shall PM you if Google can't help me, but I won't bother you over winter break because of the holidays and school :)
caching12 #9
Hello there, I've requested for a review. Thank you.
Back to Top ↑