The end of the War

My enemy, My lover
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Jiyeon POV

That stupid kid!.. how dare she lie to meand then go alone and confront my mother and brother? is she stupid or what?.. aish! I need to go and help her as soon as I can.. but I have to tell Ms. Park about the letter first.

HM MOM: "Jiyeon-ssi, did you find something?"

JY: "Ne, she left this letter for me and I'm pretty sure she left one for you too"

HM MOM: "What does the letter says?"

JY: "It explains that she was awake all this while, that she's been training secretly while you were training me and also that she went alone to fight with my brother and my mother"

HM MOM: "SHE WENT ALONE?!"

JY: "Yes, I need to get out and go help her"

HM MOM: "That will be a problem"

JY: "Why?"

HM MOM: "The whole house is in armed mode.. which means that the house is covered with a thick metal case and we can't get out of here unless is disarmed"

JY: "Ans can you disarm it?"

HM MOM: "I would if I could but, the controller tat makes the house in that mode is gone as well"

JY: "Do you think Hyomin made it that way and took the remote?"

HM MOM: "Well it's obvious now that you tell me her plan.. the thing is, we can't get out of here"

JY: "So that means tht she is alone over there"

HM MOM: "I'm afraid that yes... we will just have to wait and pray that she'll come back safe and sound"

JY: "I still don't understand why must she do this alone?"

HM MOM: "Hyomin suffered a lot when her father die and more being there when he was killed.. my guess is that she didn't want to go through that again and do this so not you or me would die"

JY: "But why didn't she thought about how would we feel? why didn't she thought about how hurt I will be if she dies or if something happens to her? WHY?!" (Crying)

HM MOM: "Let's just wait and pray Jiyeon-ssi.. Hyomin-ni will come back, I know my daughter very well"

JY: "I hope you're right Ms. Park.. I don't want to lose her, I can't loose her.. I just can't" 

END OF JY POV

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andokit11 #1
Chapter 25: Wow~ I love this story~ lol..that byun chapter~ really appreciate what u're done..n thx a lot for a sweet n happy ending~ XD

GOOD JOB!! Keep it up!!
kkenji_
#2
Chapter 25: happy ending yaaayy
i lovee thid fanfic so much
good job author
imakestories #3
Chapter 25: happy ending!! I love happy endings. thank you author
parksone #4
Chapter 25: Yay!!!!minyeon happy ending!!!
thanks for this fic author-nim...
I'm a bit sad bcuz this fic is already end...
I'm looking forward for your fanfic...
pjy317 #5
Chapter 25: The end woahh~ i love it! The end is sweet and touching. Good job author!
tasya92 #6
Chapter 24: Cant wait for the last chapter.. all ur fic always daebak..
MinYeon89
#7
Guys I'm really sorry to say that I'll update the last chapter tomorrow.. the original plan was to do it today so I could start a new one tomorrow, but the light went out and erase everything I had written even before I could save it.. Im sorry, I already put the new tittle of my new story so please go and check it out and I'll see you gys tomorrow for the last chap of this fic. thank you and sorry once again. :)
Hyomin530 #8
Chapter 24: T.T last chap already? Please keep going >~<
If you make another minyeon fic, you should try a school theme.
pjy317 #9
Chapter 24: Woaa i'm so curious what will be happen in the last chapter. Plsss update soon ><
Of course you must to make another minyeon fanfic. Um maybe about angst romance or something? Hehehe~
avrora
#10
Chapter 24: author, please make another minyeon fic^^ about what kind of fic,,hmm~your love story or first sight?? hehe. just saying>…<