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Achilie's Heel

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-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Myungsoo POV--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

She came out of the changing room and I could only stare at her bruises and scratches. 

I admit I pity her but my plan had to work.

I can't fall for her.

I have a plan. 

I smiled but she looked a bit insecure.

I grabbed her hand as we went to first floor.

"I've never swam before."

I looked at her a bit shocked.

She's never swam before!

I sqeezed her hand and smiled.

She smiled back but still looking a bit nervous.

We headed to the pool where beautiful lights glowed in the pool.

I jumped in but Ji-Yeon stepped back.

I was in the warm water waiting for Ji-yeon and I held out my hand.

She sat down on the ledge and I pushed her in.

She stood successfully and laughed.

Whoever will marry her, he'll be lucky.

Step-by-step I taught her how to swim.

The pool was only 5 feet so we both can reach the ground of the pool.

After two hours in the dark, she looked at her watch and got out of the pool.

Suddenly she ran into my house and arrived at my room.

She got her warm clothes on and smiled and waved.

"Where are you going?" I quickly asked her, curious of where she was heading so quickly.

"You don't expect me to sleep here do you?"

"I did expect you to sleep here." I smirked.

She looked at me disgusted.

She waved again.

"B-" The rest of the bye was cut off by a kiss.

I saw her open her eyes widely as she pushed me away.

"Are you Crazy!"

She slapped me and walked to the elevator.

"Go away."

I smiled at her quick remark.

We arrived at first floor and she smiled.

"That was the first fun I've had in years, thank you." She smiled and walked away.

As soon as she went out the door, I smirked.

"I'll find your weakness, actually I think I already found it."

The day ended very quickly and morning came.

I woke up with a quick stretch and smiled.

New day, new ideas.

I arrived at school and saw Ji-yeon walking to school.

I ran up to her and tapped her on the shoulder.

She smiled and waved and I smiled back.

I took my backpack off and I got something out.

I handed it to her and she looked inside.

Her eyes opened wide.

"I can't accept this."

I shook my head and pushed it to her.

"You deserve a pretty outfit."

"Thank you" She smiled widely.

Then I took something out of my pocket, and here's a ring with your name engraved.

"I really can't."

I got the ring out and put it on her finger slowly.

Kim Myungsoo and Park Ji-Yeon forever was engraved.

"I will be with you forever, always staying by your side." I said.

"Promise?"

"Promise."

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TaecZy-MyungYeon
#1
Chapter 28: Omg :c this is sad but cute too :c update soon please
Lianasaur
#2
Chapter 26: update v_v been waiting for an update for a long time
Sulsashaff #3
A new reader here...hope to love it
moon_babydino #4
Chapter 1: Oh my god? She got by her father...that ! I hate this kind of abnormal thing. Anyway i wonder what kind of way myung will fall to her.excited lol.
Claire17
#5
Chapter 23: ahh now I know why Jiyeon father hates Jiyeon so much :(
how sad :(
can't wait, please update soon author-nim... :)
Claire17
#6
Chapter 22: woah getting interesting :D
Jiyeon father still alive? what the!
can't wait please update soon author-nim:D
Subsonic
#7
Chapter 21: Her father is still out there though.. I hope the police will catch him soon! And poor Chanyeol and Jiyeon :(
Subsonic
#8
Chapter 20: Glad that Suzy is gone. Where the heck is Chanyeol anyway? I mean, your sister is in the hospital, what the hell are you doing, not even visiting her? Glad Jiyeon forgave Myungsoo btw.
Madelynol203 #9
Chapter 17: I'm sorry if I'm being rude but do you not know what to do with this story or is there a problem? Bc I can't wait anymore XD it's just so good and you haven't been updating but I see you logged in today probably just to read stories but didn't write anything for your fanfic :( Any way hope you write one soon !FIGHTING AUTHORNIM!<3 ;)
Claire17
#10
Chapter 19: Oh My God I hope Jiyeonnie get well soon...:O
can't wait, please update soon author-nim..:)