Sixteen

Achilie's Heel

"Myungs- Myungsoo."

I heard the front door bang loudly multiple times.

Tears shot out of my eyes as I heard him shout "I love you".

"I love you too." I whispered.

My dad returned in his office and turned off the light.

5 minutes later I smelled..... fire.

I smell fire.

I started to scream, ignoring the pain on every inch of my body from the beating he gave me earlier.

Then I saw a faint orange light glowing at the corner of the room.

Every second the fire came closer spreading throughout the whole room.

"Myung-soo YAH!!!!"

Myungsoo POV

Then I heard my name.

A quiet and weak voice calling my name.

I turned around, "Suzy."

"Myungsoo-yah, can you take me home?"

"But.... Jiyeon."

She smirked and came closer.

Then she whispered, "Let's ignore her and go."

"No," I said firmly.

She started to drag me, then we heard a blast.

She stopped pulling me, and tears started to drift from her eyes.

"Myung- Myungsoo yah."

Then she pointed to Jiyeon's house behind me.

I looked and time stopped.

I shouted Jiyeon's name more than a million times.

I couldn't hear her.

I tried going inside but Suzy stopped me, her eyes full with tears also.

Then we heard the siren of firetrucks, poilce cars, and the ambulance.

I ran up to the firemen, "Jiyeon, Jiyeon." I pointed to the house.

Suzy was sitting on the ground crying her eyes out, calling Jiyeon's name quietly.

I followed the firemen but they forcefully pushed me away from them.

"Son, please, don't come near, leave it to us," one of them said as they ran into the house.

5 firemen went in.

I sat down in front of the house anxiously waiting.

In 5 minuted they were out.

Except, there were only 3 firemen and an unconcious Jiyeon in their arms.

Jiyeon was dark from the fire, sweaty like she played basketball for 45 hours, and was bleeding, a lot.

More tears fell out as I cried for Jiyeon.

"Why is her life so unfair!" I yelled.

People surrounding us were crying for Jiyeon and how pitiful she was.

The little girl from the park, I see her.

In her mom's arms, both crying their eyes out.

Then I saw him.

Jiyeon's brother, Chanyeol.

 

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TaecZy-MyungYeon
#1
Chapter 28: Omg :c this is sad but cute too :c update soon please
Lianasaur
#2
Chapter 26: update v_v been waiting for an update for a long time
Sulsashaff #3
A new reader here...hope to love it
moon_babydino #4
Chapter 1: Oh my god? She got by her father...that ! I hate this kind of abnormal thing. Anyway i wonder what kind of way myung will fall to her.excited lol.
Claire17
#5
Chapter 23: ahh now I know why Jiyeon father hates Jiyeon so much :(
how sad :(
can't wait, please update soon author-nim... :)
Claire17
#6
Chapter 22: woah getting interesting :D
Jiyeon father still alive? what the!
can't wait please update soon author-nim:D
Subsonic
#7
Chapter 21: Her father is still out there though.. I hope the police will catch him soon! And poor Chanyeol and Jiyeon :(
Subsonic
#8
Chapter 20: Glad that Suzy is gone. Where the heck is Chanyeol anyway? I mean, your sister is in the hospital, what the hell are you doing, not even visiting her? Glad Jiyeon forgave Myungsoo btw.
Madelynol203 #9
Chapter 17: I'm sorry if I'm being rude but do you not know what to do with this story or is there a problem? Bc I can't wait anymore XD it's just so good and you haven't been updating but I see you logged in today probably just to read stories but didn't write anything for your fanfic :( Any way hope you write one soon !FIGHTING AUTHORNIM!<3 ;)
Claire17
#10
Chapter 19: Oh My God I hope Jiyeonnie get well soon...:O
can't wait, please update soon author-nim..:)