Eleven

Achilie's Heel

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Jiyeon POV

We went to the park to sit down, and I was scared.

Scared that he would find out.

Then I felt a  sudden weight on my shoulder.

I widened my eyes and smiled.

"Myungsoo.... What do you think of blind people."

"People that aren't accepted in the world."

I bit my lip, isn't he a bit too harsh.......

"Jiyeon.... you don't need to feel sorry because you aren't blind."

I looked at him and faked a smile.

"You need to meet someone."

Myungsoo grabbed my hands and cupped my face.

Then he let go.

I widened my eyes, did he just leave me?

Then I felt a hug.

It must be Myungsoo.

I smiled and hugged him back.

"Yah! I missed you so much."

I let go.... It's not Myungsoo's voice.

"Jiyeon-ah"

I thought hard.

"Ch-Chanyeol?"

"YES!!!! FINALLY!"

I smiled and hugged Chanyeol.

"I missed you too Chanyeol."

Chanyeol grabbed my wrist and at first we started to walk but then we started to run.

I scrunched up my face trying not to fall on my face.

Chanyeol stopped running....

"Why is your face like that... stop it."

I laughed and unwrinkled my face.

Then we started to run again.

Where's Myungsoo?

We opened a door and I felt a cool breeze.

Then my phone started to ring.....

How do blind people answer the phone?

I just say hello and the phone answers for me.

"Hello?"

The person that called answered back.

"It's the hospital, we found someone that will give you their cornea!"

I screamed happily and ended the phone call.

I hugged Chanyeol and ran around.

Then I felt awkward silence.

"Yah- Jiyeon, all the students are looking at you weridly..."

I felt myself become a beet and I smiled.

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"Can you go with me."

I held out my hand.

He grabbed it and started to drag me.

So I guess I'm going to school again....

 

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TaecZy-MyungYeon
#1
Chapter 28: Omg :c this is sad but cute too :c update soon please
Lianasaur
#2
Chapter 26: update v_v been waiting for an update for a long time
Sulsashaff #3
A new reader here...hope to love it
moon_babydino #4
Chapter 1: Oh my god? She got by her father...that ! I hate this kind of abnormal thing. Anyway i wonder what kind of way myung will fall to her.excited lol.
Claire17
#5
Chapter 23: ahh now I know why Jiyeon father hates Jiyeon so much :(
how sad :(
can't wait, please update soon author-nim... :)
Claire17
#6
Chapter 22: woah getting interesting :D
Jiyeon father still alive? what the!
can't wait please update soon author-nim:D
Subsonic
#7
Chapter 21: Her father is still out there though.. I hope the police will catch him soon! And poor Chanyeol and Jiyeon :(
Subsonic
#8
Chapter 20: Glad that Suzy is gone. Where the heck is Chanyeol anyway? I mean, your sister is in the hospital, what the hell are you doing, not even visiting her? Glad Jiyeon forgave Myungsoo btw.
Madelynol203 #9
Chapter 17: I'm sorry if I'm being rude but do you not know what to do with this story or is there a problem? Bc I can't wait anymore XD it's just so good and you haven't been updating but I see you logged in today probably just to read stories but didn't write anything for your fanfic :( Any way hope you write one soon !FIGHTING AUTHORNIM!<3 ;)
Claire17
#10
Chapter 19: Oh My God I hope Jiyeonnie get well soon...:O
can't wait, please update soon author-nim..:)