Nine

Achilie's Heel

AHHHHH!!!! 29 SUBSCRIBERS!!!! DANG THAT"S A LOT!!! Oh my god I can't thank you guys enough! Did you guys see T-ara's new comeback?! OHMIGOD SO COOL!!! (although the light hurt my eyes) ! THANK YOU MY LOVELIES! <3! I want to give respect to Ladie's Code. Umm... I really don't know what to say. They had their funeral and I just can't explain how I feel. People think that the sasaeng fan that predicted that a popular 2014 kpop idol will die killed them but I think this problem isn't something that needs to involve a sasaeng fan. I loved EunB and Ri-Se. I bawled my eyes out on Sept.2, I will continue my story...

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MYUNGSOO POV

I saw that girl with long hair, she looked like a soft person.

I smiled, as I thought of JI-Yeon.

I sat next to her so I can get a glimpse of her face.

That's when everything changes.

That's when Harry Potter met Ginny.

That's when Romeo met Juliet.

That's when Jack met Rose.

That's when my life started.

She turned around, my life stopped.

"J-Jiyeon?"

Her eyes turned wide open and her lips curved into a smile as she said my name loudly.

I simply answered and smiled.

She hugged me rather tightly but I just sat there feeling confused.

"I'm not dead!"

She let go of the hug and looked at the ground.

"Myungsoo I'M NOT DEAD!!!"

I smiled and nodded.

She stood up from the bench with her long legs and long brown hair.

She looked like an angel.

Only one question comes up in my brain, "Do you still love me?"

Her eyes turned watery as she asked for my hand.

I put my hand into her as I stood up.

She got on her tip-toes and leaned closer to my face.

Chu~ She pecked my cheek as she blushed a rosy colour.

She grabbed my hand as we started to walk toward...... A tree?

"Ji-Jiyeon the trail is this way."

She stopped at her track and as she blinked a tear rolled down her face as she gulped.

She smiled and she pulled me to..... another tree?

"Ji-Jiyeon that's not the way to the trail either."

She stuttered but managed to talk, "M-Myung-ah L-Let's just s-sit down."

I pulled her to the bench and we sat down.

"I- have to tell you something." She looked a bit worried.

"Sure."

"Myungsoo I'm b-"

Ji-Yeon POV

Suddenly I heard a scream from the playground.

Saet-Byul! 

I tried to run to the playground but fell due to a log.

Someone grabbed my hand and tried to pull me up.

I let go of his grip and decided to scream for help.

"Ji-Yeon it's me Myungsoo." 

I started to cry my heart out.

I heard the scream again.

I stood up, and successfully felt mulch and ran to the scream.

I felt an immediate hug.

Ji-Yeon unnie! Look at my knees!

I could tell, after she said that she covered .

I smiled and tried to pick her up but fell due to my balance.

"Ouch... my ."

I winced in pain as mulch digged into my skin.

Saet-Byul tounched my leg as she pushed me to sit down.

She started to blow on my knees.

Suddenly I felt lifted from the ground, I was about to scream when I felt this comfort.

I immediately knew who this was.

My Myungsoo.

He let me go and said, "Go and walk by yourself."

I could hear cars passing by.

I gulped, I took a deep breathe, Myungsoo can't know I'm blind.

I took my first step when I heard a loud beep of a car.

I closed my eyes wondering will I still survive.

 

 

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TaecZy-MyungYeon
#1
Chapter 28: Omg :c this is sad but cute too :c update soon please
Lianasaur
#2
Chapter 26: update v_v been waiting for an update for a long time
Sulsashaff #3
A new reader here...hope to love it
moon_babydino #4
Chapter 1: Oh my god? She got by her father...that ! I hate this kind of abnormal thing. Anyway i wonder what kind of way myung will fall to her.excited lol.
Claire17
#5
Chapter 23: ahh now I know why Jiyeon father hates Jiyeon so much :(
how sad :(
can't wait, please update soon author-nim... :)
Claire17
#6
Chapter 22: woah getting interesting :D
Jiyeon father still alive? what the!
can't wait please update soon author-nim:D
Subsonic
#7
Chapter 21: Her father is still out there though.. I hope the police will catch him soon! And poor Chanyeol and Jiyeon :(
Subsonic
#8
Chapter 20: Glad that Suzy is gone. Where the heck is Chanyeol anyway? I mean, your sister is in the hospital, what the hell are you doing, not even visiting her? Glad Jiyeon forgave Myungsoo btw.
Madelynol203 #9
Chapter 17: I'm sorry if I'm being rude but do you not know what to do with this story or is there a problem? Bc I can't wait anymore XD it's just so good and you haven't been updating but I see you logged in today probably just to read stories but didn't write anything for your fanfic :( Any way hope you write one soon !FIGHTING AUTHORNIM!<3 ;)
Claire17
#10
Chapter 19: Oh My God I hope Jiyeonnie get well soon...:O
can't wait, please update soon author-nim..:)