ASTRAY

Eternities

XII. SANG HYUK

 

It was a Tuesday.

 

She was a four minutes late when she entered the classroom. Everyone stared at her, mumbling amongst themselves. She sat down her seat which was beside mine, her head hung low. I smiled at her; she smiled back. It was the sweetest smile I've seen in my life.

 

...The sweetest smile I've ever seen from her.

 

By the afternoon, she took her pills again. It was an obvious lot today. I neared her and asked if she was okay. "Are you having enough sleep?" I asked as I stared at the dark circles under her ruined eyes. She nodded lightly, the smile didn't fade. By dismissal, she ran towards me, crying. "I'm just so tired..." She said. There were many things that I wanted to tell her the next day.

 

But what I saw was a note:

 

"I'm sorry, Hyuk... Happy Birthday."

 

...She died that Wednesday.

 

 

150 words.

PROMPT 10. It was one of those days when everything seemed to go wrong.

 

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11/22/14 - shout out to barooya for being an awesome reader as always /cri /cri /cri (;w; ) iwuvyouall heheheheh
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barooya #1
Chapter 26: Whaaaaaaaaat hahahahahahaha that was such a twist!

But then I saw the prompt. Were you involved in an accident? My goodness, I hope everything's alright...
barooya #2
Chapter 25: Hahahahaha I read my previous comment for this chapter. I have a different feeling this time.

It's so random??????? Hahahahaha imagine an anime character came out after you go eat for abt 20 minutes?? And later you realized you should've been doing homework

Hahaha idk it's funny... Hyuk is so funny and playful :)))
barooya #3
Chapter 24: How amazing to get an inspiration merely by just watching Pewdiepie's vid ^o^)b
barooya #4
Chapter 23: Hahahahahaha I remember reading this before! The funny thing is, I mistaken Wonshik as the secretary! And when the boss is a man, you know, I freaked out. Took me a while to figure that I misunderstood the point of views :)))
barooya #5
Chapter 22: My goodness. Idk how hard I cringed while reading this... Gore is totally not my thing but I don't mind reading it. Thanks for writing this for me, I really appreciate it!
barooya #6
Chapter 17: And of course, throwback to one of the best era of VIXX, Error. I really love everyone's hair except Ravi's lolol. This is so nicely written...
barooya #7
Chapter 16: Wow. This reminds me of a webcomic 'Bastard'. You should check on naver webtoon! The story's depressing tho, and just like this drabble you made. I guess I can't stand depression, because I'm already getting a headache on a heavy story like this. Maybe?
barooya #8
Chapter 15: This is sad tbh... I meet a lot of people like this. Because they're always playing pranks on people once they're serious people just won't believe. Yeah some are plain pranksters but when it comes to a person like Jaehwan... Idk. Idk why I feel pity xD
barooya #9
Chapter 14: I...am scared. I felt tension building up on my head when I read this. The way you wrote it really seeps in.
barooya #10
Chapter 12: I love how the prompts are so simple and yet you were able to come out with this idea.... Like using days... Wow I'm awed *-*
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