AFFECTION

Eternities

 

I. HAK YEON

 

 

I asked her to meet with me at the nearest park at 10 am. I told myself that today is the day while trying to calm my nerves and senses. I was all set and ready - Wearing my plaid shirt with my jet-black bangs covering my forehead. It was a warm, sunny day. The weather was fair. What more could go wrong? I asked myself.

 

After a while, I saw her coming. I clasped my hands together, eager to say the words that kept on getting loose out of my mouth. The words that spelled “I like you.” For a while, the whole world turned silent. It was a stand-still. Clicking her tongue, she answered back. Letting out a frown, she gave her apology and bowed, she left right after.

 

I was speechless. Heartbroken. That day, she didn’t know that a thousand other people closest in proximity were heartbroken, too.

 

 

150 words

PROMPT 187. Your protagonist's emotions affect the thousand people closest in proximity to him or her. The guy/girl s/he likes rejects him.

 

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11/22/14 - shout out to barooya for being an awesome reader as always /cri /cri /cri (;w; ) iwuvyouall heheheheh
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barooya #1
Chapter 26: Whaaaaaaaaat hahahahahahaha that was such a twist!

But then I saw the prompt. Were you involved in an accident? My goodness, I hope everything's alright...
barooya #2
Chapter 25: Hahahahaha I read my previous comment for this chapter. I have a different feeling this time.

It's so random??????? Hahahahaha imagine an anime character came out after you go eat for abt 20 minutes?? And later you realized you should've been doing homework

Hahaha idk it's funny... Hyuk is so funny and playful :)))
barooya #3
Chapter 24: How amazing to get an inspiration merely by just watching Pewdiepie's vid ^o^)b
barooya #4
Chapter 23: Hahahahahaha I remember reading this before! The funny thing is, I mistaken Wonshik as the secretary! And when the boss is a man, you know, I freaked out. Took me a while to figure that I misunderstood the point of views :)))
barooya #5
Chapter 22: My goodness. Idk how hard I cringed while reading this... Gore is totally not my thing but I don't mind reading it. Thanks for writing this for me, I really appreciate it!
barooya #6
Chapter 17: And of course, throwback to one of the best era of VIXX, Error. I really love everyone's hair except Ravi's lolol. This is so nicely written...
barooya #7
Chapter 16: Wow. This reminds me of a webcomic 'Bastard'. You should check on naver webtoon! The story's depressing tho, and just like this drabble you made. I guess I can't stand depression, because I'm already getting a headache on a heavy story like this. Maybe?
barooya #8
Chapter 15: This is sad tbh... I meet a lot of people like this. Because they're always playing pranks on people once they're serious people just won't believe. Yeah some are plain pranksters but when it comes to a person like Jaehwan... Idk. Idk why I feel pity xD
barooya #9
Chapter 14: I...am scared. I felt tension building up on my head when I read this. The way you wrote it really seeps in.
barooya #10
Chapter 12: I love how the prompts are so simple and yet you were able to come out with this idea.... Like using days... Wow I'm awed *-*
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