Beneath Dresses and Tresses

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Pretence and lies have to cover up for a payment promised in the past. Deceit is a must to fulfil the silliest of debts. Lee Sungmin keeps his secret well and he would forever will, or so he hopes. 

Foreword

Prologue 

Spring

 

War has ended ten years ago.

 

Hostilities, anger, pain, and bitterness were left buried alongside the people who had fought. Peace reined the country for two decades and every family starts anew.

 

Titles of lords and ladies multiply in the developing city as maids and footmen did. Stone mansions rivalled wooden homes as the country continued to rise up once again.

 

And as the sun rises and sets, the difference of two castes heightens. There were only the rich... and the poor.

 

An hour away from the hustle of the city stood a handsome orchard in a peaceful countryside, with a lake not so far away housing carps and trout and a number of koi. The line of cherry blossoms stood a few feet from a beautiful bricked road. The place was a photograph shaped into reality.

 

Some says it was dream, some says it was heaven itself.

 

For a young boy of nine, it was the norm. The place he resides in was nothing but a house, a shelter that shields him – a home perhaps, but nothing more. It is most especially not a paradise, more like a training ground, a place for him to shape himself as to what he would be in the future.

 

Carrying the pail half his weight, he strutted through the line of shrubs and bushes towards the beautiful house. Smoke from the chimney was clouding his view of the skies. His eyes rounded and his lips pouted as his stomach whined loudly.

 

He hurriedly walked back, not minding the small splashes escaping his pail with nothing but dinner in his head.

 

Cabbage soup and roasted chicken was almost a feast for him, his hands were greased and his mouth full as he stuffed his stomach with the food.

 

The woman sitting opposite him, an infant cradled in her arms looked at him with a soft smile. Her brown locks were hidden from her cap, tightened by a yellow ribbon. Her dress was still hidden behind a soiled apron as she helped herself with dinner. The baby on her chest slept soundly like a child cuddled on soft pillow and blankets.

 

He smiled back at her as they both finished their meal.

 

“Watch what you eat kid.” She murmured softly as he cleaned their small table. “You are watching your figure. Remember, no muscles, no fat.”

 

He nodded in understanding as he finished his delectable meal.

 

As the night goes deep, he helped the woman to her bed, tucked her baby and settled on his own small chamber at the attic of the cottage. His room has but a window, showing a beautiful framed image of the skies at morning and at night. The cold breeze did nothing as the chimney end was at one of its wall. The gaps of the logs provided as his drawers of leaflets, papers, and readings, those that were dropped by travellers from cars and carriages that he had studied secretly.

 

He has charcoal as his pen, and little by little, he taught himself to write.

 

His future was sure. He knew where he was headed for and soon, he has to leave the house he had accustomed himself with for four years.

 

The beautiful and kind lady who takes care of him was doing it for a cause. She was not his real mother; nevertheless, she was almost one. Until she had her real baby, a boy with beautiful pink cheeks and skin as white as snow. He felt her drift slowly as the baby starts to grow, and most of the time, she was quiet towards him.

 

“Do not grow close to me. You’ll leave soon anyway.” She told him when he arrived first at her cottage. She was young back then, more beautiful and kind. Her eyes were soft and gentle but she forced him not to care for her, especially love her. She would never be his mother.

 

MOTHER – the first word he learned to write on his crumpled sheet using a piece of coal. His letters were ragged, but he knew, he wrote it right.

 

Despite her forcing him not to care, despite her getting indifferent towards him, he had cared for her, he loves her.

 

Even if he was nothing but a payment of a debt.  

 

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A/N: Hi! Here's the new story I've been blabbering about in Twitter. I'm sorry if I just posted this now. I've been quite scared of this story because I don't know if everyone would like it. Just imagine this as a different Korea, a bit of 1920-ish London time. I invented this so yeah.

Anyway, updates for this would be slower than Attention because I promise 4k+ words per part. This would run along ten to fifteen chapters. (I hope)  No this is definitely longer.

I love you all. Do tell me what you think about this okay!?

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tttham
#1
Chapter 20: Hi Writer

I like the beginning parts is like and sweet.

Hopefully, the ending parts can be loving and meaningful to be happy together not separate.



Thanks
LeeLenaMx #2
Chapter 20: Loved your story! But the end... I never expected this... five years is a lot of time!! I really hope they truly found each other after all these time.

Thank you for sharing this story, you did a beautiful work!
IvyPham
#3
Chapter 20: Chapter 20: This story is so beautiful. The language, the scenery, the emotions. All so beautiful. I love the ending. Especially the 'Odyssey' metaphor that compares Kyuhyun and Odyssey's journey home. Its just really emotional. Im glad that both of them got out of the noble life and trying to find themselves. Tks for the fic, authornim
angelamy #4
Chapter 20: This was really a good story. Like really ... happy that sungmin finally found piece, I got frustrated with scene when the ladies made the commotion in the lee residence. If I was in sungmin place, I would have lost my mind. This story made a roller coaster of emotions, I really wish if u consider making an epilogue
thank you so much for the story ... I am so proud of it .. im proud that there's such an SJ fanfic ..
somaming #5
Chapter 20: this was beautiful, Literally beautiful. You have that unique way of writing and expressing feelings that made cry several times ( you still have to pay for the tissue that i've used tho ). im not really fond of middle aged stories cuz i find difficulties in imaging them but this was a piece of art. The open end, even though open ends are not my cup of tea but i dunno how and why i loved this one! Maybe becuz of the hope? I dont know but just everything was amazing that i dont know how to set my gratitude in an appropriate way
leebrothershan #6
Chapter 20: This story is beautiful, your choice of words are so mesmerizing.. It's painful and heavy, it made me hopeless of kyumin herr but this stylr of writing is really special and classic.. I enjoy it so much... Since it seems you won't make an epilogue of that most awaited and heart-touching 5years later, I can only set it on my mind ;------; thankyou for making this :)
kitty1025 #7
Chapter 20: Wonderful story I wanted to read them aoctually meeting again but knowing they be together again is cute. Thank you so mUCH FOR this.
naricaat #8
Chapter 20: Huhuuu great story. I cried my eyes out lots
Holymotherofduck
#9
Chapter 20: I need a five years later epilogue XD
God I love this story so much!!!!!