Unlucky

Description

This is Seunghyun's story.

Contained within his own world Seunghyun Choi is quite content with living his life from the inside of his bedroom. He can't be bothered to get dressed or even comb his hair, fashion is just pretentious rubbish anyway. Who needs to look good for a world that doesn't give a damn about all the wrongs that it so happily commits every single day? Why should he think about how someone else may or may not see him? You can't see him? Well that's great. He really doesn't care. It really doesn't matter.

That is until he meets a scrawney shop assistant who completely changes his life. Well sort of.

 

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I’m a fool, I’m a fool who only sees you, I thank you
All my friends are jealous because of the fool who only sees me
You’re a fool, a fool who only sees me, I will trust you forever
Let’s be together, fools who only look at each other.

- Lyrics from Juniel and Jung Yonghwa's Fool.

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Edit: 2021 pinktops here, hello. I just want to point out that these things were written many years ago and some of my opinions have obviously matured and developed. I had planned on editing the stories to make it more up to date with the person I am now but in all honesty this was a big part of my early 20s where I wanted to learn and I wanted to grow. So I think it's okay for me to leave them up, even if I don't agree with some of the themes or interpretations anymore. At the end of the day this is just fiction, it's supposed to be random fun so I hope you enjoy it anyway. Some of the photos didn't survive the photobucket purge so I'll either be remaking them (because omg they were awful) or they just won't have pictures included. Please don't reupload without my permission and feel free to pm me if you have any questions or concerns.


 

pinktops
Wow 100 subscribers, thank you guys so much! I'm glad you're still enjoying this story. It's my baby

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SCarpediem
#1
this is a long story and after finishing the whole story I feel like I've been grown with them... i appreciate the value you tried to bring out through the story^^
Blue82 #2
Chapter 25: I read this in one incredibly long sitting. I feel like I lived the emotions they went through and I don't have that happen very often with any writing much less fan fiction. If you changed the names I really think you could get this published as a short story. I don't know if I should cry while smiling or just hug this close to me.
jongdae-licious
#3
Chapter 25: The most beautiful story... :) :)
jongdae-licious
#4
Chapter 12: Glad that 'Bae Rescue Services' is here for Ji :) :) :)
jongdae-licious
#5
Chapter 2: So sweet ♡♡♡ .. already Seunghyun is feeling something?
Bianca_MSP #6
To curiosa
tayo-totshi-ai #7
Chapter 13: I'm so happy for Seung Hyun to have found Dami and Little Hyun *-* I hope he won't forget and will go on pursuing Ji as well ;)
tayo-totshi-ai #8
Chapter 11: This letter is so wonderful ;_;
tayo-totshi-ai #9
Chapter 8: 'You make me wan to be a better person and I want you to be the very best that you can be, because you are the best thing that has ever happend to me.'- *-*
I just fell in love, too. So wonderful and heartwarming :D
imagoandego #10
Chapter 25: I finally finished reading this, and I'm so glad that I did. It addressed the difficulties of their relationship realistically and showed the strength it takes for a couple to survive it all. I also don't think I've laughed harder during the course of any one particular story!
I'm still not over Seungri's mooing,tbh.
Though I'd read LL first, and this was completely different, I was glad to see that through it all, your style for two "hero's" is consistent :)