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Dorm of Love
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[D-Day]

 

Lizzy: Unnie, are you going?

Nana: I don’t know yet.

Lizzy: ok. I’ll be going then.

 

“Please don’t come Nana. Please don’t.” Lizzy pleaded to herself knowing that if Nana came, she would have no hope with Nana.

 

[At the party]

 

Taeyeon: Sooyoung, are you looking for something? She asked when Sooyoung kept looking around.

Sooyoung: hm?...yea…

Taeyeon: do you want me to help?

Sooyoung: no it’s fine Taeng. She turned back to the group.

Sunny: hey it’s Yoona and Yuri. Sunny pointed to the couple that was approaching, holding hands.

Yuri + Yoona: hi guys.

All: hey.

Seohyun: you two look so good together.

 

Yoona and Yuri smiled at each other intimately.

 

Yuri: Of course we do. Yuri pecked Yoona on the lips, but Yoona pulled the latter closer in for a deeper kiss.

Sunny: yah go get a room you two.

Yuri: don’t worry, I will tonight.

 

Seeing the sweet couple in front of her eyes, Sooyoung wanted Nana back even more. She missed the days where she could be so sweet too. The days where her heart would still be warm even though it was a chilling day.

 

Taeyeon: you ok Soo? She asked patting on Sooyoung’s back.

 

Sooyoung nodded.

 

Taeyeon: wanna go grab some food?

Sooyoung: sure.

Yoona: I’m coming too!

 

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Jooyeon:Lizzy you seem quiet.

Uee: yea, is everything ok?

Jooyeon: It must Nana. Only she can make you like this.

 

Lizzy sighed.

 

Jooyeon: what happened?

Lizzy: She likes Sooyoung.

Uee: Sooyoung? You?

Lizzy: Not me. The skinny-legged Sooyoung.

Jooyeon: ah~ Choi Sooyoung. She’s y. I’d choose her too if I was Nana.

Uee: Yah!

Jooyeon: keke…how’d you know?

Lizzy: I just do.

Uee: Is she coming today?

Lizzy: I hope not.

Uee: why?

Lizzy: If she comes, she’s gonna be with Sooyoung.

Jooyeon: yah…she’s here. Jooyeon saw Nana walking in the entrance in a mini skirt and tee.

Lizzy: It’s over.

 

Lizzy watched as Nana slowly made her way through the crowd. And soon she saw Sooyoung run towards Nana.

 

Sooyoung: you’re here. She hugged Nana as soon as she saw her.

Nana: ne.

Sooyoung: thank you…..for giving us a chance again. So…are we dating again?

 

Nana pulled back to see Sooyoung’s face. She smiled in response.

 

Sooyoung: I love you Nana.

 

Sooyoung gently put her lips against Nana’s and they moved their lips in rhythm. The kiss they’ve missed for so many months and the ways the latter fulfilled their desire for one another, had finally returned.

Lizzy watched as the two reunited. Her nose turned into a red spot and her eyes filled with misery which soon became tears. Every movement in Nana’s lips made Lizzy drop down her face and within a minute her shirt had a big wet patch where her tears got absorbed.

After what seemed like a year to Lizzy, Sooyoung and Nana finally pulled away. Both of them with a large smile on their face.

“Why Nana. Why did you come?” Lizzy cried. “Couldn’t you have at least done it in a more private place? Why did you let me see you?!!” Lizzy ran back

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AfterMusesSpica #1
Naliz is real ♡ Naliz is MY ULTIMATE KPOP SHIPPED COUPLE omgg. Beagle(Lizzy) and the Fox (Nana) *_*
kodeng
#2
Chapter 1: the way you make the stories is the best.. because you used the dialogue which that make the readers more understand n know who's the on who talking. :)
naliz <3
JeTiLoveJeNy
#3
Chapter 22: The end is totally worth it though i really wished it to belonger... Yay NaLiz! <3<3
And I hope those JeTimoments were real? :-P<3<3<3

Man u went through a whole lot of heartbreaks here and there haha xD

Great plot and well written! :-D

Keep going!
zephyrkaze
#4
Chapter 22: sad because this is an ending, but happy because it's happy ending :)
naliz finally together, yeah ^^
mondchan
#5
Chapter 22: ahhh....
it's already end D:
nice story ^^ and nice ending..finally naliz together right???
renminki
#6
Chapter 22: aw so sad that this is the ending :(
and finally sooyoung realizes that taeyeon is always been for her through hard times
taeyeon ftw!
sootae r so cute
and LOL to sunny taking pictures of them aww..
to lizzy geez nana just confessed to her and she was still playing hard to get LOL
at the end lizzy gave in to nana hehehe
thanks for the hardwork author^^
ChooChooPanda #7
Such a beautiful ending ;-; will there be an epilogue? ^^ Anyways i really enjoyed reading this :D
MQ_Jadyn
#8
Chapter 22: beautiful ending~
very touching~
thanks author-nim!