Chapter 9 " The Beach

Do You Love Me??

Omg im so mad right now :( I typed up the whole chapter and my computer froze up and i had to retype the whole thing!!! I wish they would've just saved it for me.. Oh well..

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Descripitions: *Just try your best to imagine how everyone will look LOL

Jessica: Curly hair, Blue polka dotted bikini

Krystal: Pink striped bikini

Seohyun: Purple flowered bikini

Yoona: Plain blue bikini

Hara: Brown striped bikini

Jessica's POV

"We are here!" I said trying to cut Donghae off of what he was going to say

"Wow its so pretty outside!!"Seohyun said cheerfully.

30 minutes later.. (Jessica, Seohyun, Krystal, and Yoona were in the changing rooms)

"Unni!! I don't want to ear a bikini infront of everyone!" Seohyun complained.

"This is the beach right?" Yoona said.

"Jessica...Krystal began "Don't you think that Hara girl likes Donghae Oppa alot...??"

"She probably doesn't but why would I care if she does or doesn't" I said lying.

"What's up with you and Donghae" Krystal asked again.

"Something happend with them two...."Seohyun said trying to tell the story to everyone.

"Actually...Sunhwa told me that she had mistaken her feelings for Donghae and she only liked him as her older brother..She said she ws sorry for all she had done and wish that you and Donghae will get along." Yoona said.

"I don't really care if someone likes Donghae its none of my bussiness....I got completly over him along time ago..." I lied.

"Let's go already i bet they are already out there waiting"

"Unni!!! I don't want to show me in a bikini!!" Seohyun whined again.

"I wonder what Siwon oppa looks like withoout a shirt on..."Yoona mumbled out loud.

"Yoona!!!" Everyone screamed laughing.

Donghae's POV

What's taking them so long....

The guys and I have been ready for the past 10 minutes.

Then I saw Hara walk out of another changing room.

"Oppa!!" I heard her said.

I turned towards her..suprisingly she was talking to me.

"How do I look oppa??" She asked me.

"Umm yeah okay.." I said looking to see if the other girls had came out yet.

"You look great Hara!!" Siwon said.

Finally they came out.

Wow....i looked over at Jessica she was in a bright blue and white bikini while her curls bounced as she walked...

She was really pretty.....okay i admit she looked hot!

Kyuhyun's POV

The girls finally came out and I saw Seohyun.

She looked really pretty and hot but still she looked innocent.

I loved her innocent looks.

Taemin's POV

I laughed looking at hyung whose eyes were glued to Jessica.

I looked over at Kyuhyun and Siwon who was also looking at Seohyun and Yoona noona..

I turned around and saw Krystal....She was really pretty. Prettier than normal!

"Hey!! Since everyone is here lets play vollyball" I suggested.

Everyone just nodded

"How about girls against guys??"

Everyone agreed except for Siwon and Yoona who were flirting so they didn't pay any attention.

"We served first!" the girls yelled.

We started playing and actually the girls were better than we expected.

"4-6!! I called out.

I served the ball.

"I got it!!" Krystal yelled running to hit the ball back.

The game ended when the guys (of course) beat the the girls 12-11.

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Sorry this was such a failed chapter XD
Theres more coming :) The next few chapters will be more intersecting

i promise!! :)
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9/23 So until i get back the inspiration I won't be updating. Sorry for the dissappointment :/ Suprised no one unsubscribed so thanks :)

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howlshimazu
#1
it’s been so long since i last read this story
Kpop_lover777
#2
Chapter 35: I'M SO MAD RIGHT NOW AAT DONGHAE !! ESPECIALLY HARA ! THAT B*TCH ! urgghhh, donghaee! why you're soooo stupid !!! i mean , seriously , he's just sooo stupid ! marriage is a serious thing . he shouldn't get marry that easily just because hara said WHAT IF she's pregnant ! he should wait for a few weeks and then go to the doctor , check whether hara really pregnant . she didn't even get checked if she's pregnant or not , but donghae , he immediately agree to marry hara .. -_- . buuut , why everyone so sure that hara's pregnant ???
LoVeKpOp2
#3
Chapter 35: poor Sica :( Stupid Hara you biach XD Hae is only Sica's And Hara get your self In a Closet and lock your self or I will... ^^ Hwaiting update soon :D please more SeoKyu :D
NeverStopBelieving
#4
Love your fanfic ♥
Please Update Soon!!!!
gabinee_junior
#5
Hara!!! I hate you! But really, Hara, should have proof that you're pregnant so that you'll get married. Gah! Author-nim, I'm frustrated. Poor Sica, she never has to know about it. :((

Update soon!
bella78 #6
poor jessica :( i hate hara seriously~! she make jessica cry.. why can't donghae know hara is lying? oh well he's drunk anyway~ update soon :) haesica <3 taestal <3
jundaes
#7
Glad you updated, poor sica T.T
Mariaaa #8
so sad... dumb hara...please update soon!
minstal_1 #9
poor Sica :((
iloveSeoKyu
#10
Poor Sica.. T.T